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Granite by livelylinda

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I really liked your poem. While reading this poem you can almost feel the passion and the sorrow that the reader portrays. Sorry to hear about your father. Loosing a love one can be hard and no matter how much you try and move on there is always something to remind you of them. Thank you for a beautiful poem.
Comment Written by Block on 05-Mar-2016

The Bully Named Saul by EricDaGoose

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I thought your poem was really cute and it also tells a very true story for some kids today. Bullying is such a problem these days that we all need to work together to stop it. I believe most bully's do what they do because they seek attention that they are not getting at home or any where else. It still doesn't make it right though. Very nice poem to address an issue that everyone needs to know about.
Comment Written by Block on 05-Mar-2016

The Violin by RGstar

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This poem made me stop and just and listening. It was so beautifully written and with the violin playing the back ground made your heart feel the strength of the poem and made you feel the love and the sincerity between to the to. I felt the tears in my eyes as I sat an d listen to the poetry's story. This poem touches your heart to the utmost. My son plays the violin in his high school orchestra and this poem just reminds me of the beauty of the violin. Very Very good job. I love this peom...
Comment Written by Block on 20-Oct-2015

The Secret Sex Club: Chapter 4 by ppersia
Chapter 4 of the book The Secret Sex Club

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I must say that I loved reading this not because of the sexuality but because how mysterious Cat is. I'm going to go back and read the earlier so I can find out more about Cat and how she became to be this mysterious dominatrix. I think we all have that wild side in us but are to afraid to show it. Cat lets hers out and that is what I like about her. I can live my fantasies out through her...lol
Comment Written by Block on 20-Oct-2015

Beth's Surprise by Mastery
Chapter 29 of the book Triple Crossed

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I liked what I read but a little confused because I haven't read the previous chapters but it had me very intrigued so I'm going to go back and read the earlier chapters so I can catch up. I love detective and mystery books so I am looking forward to reading this one especially what I have read so far. Very good job and congratulations on your published book. I look forward to reading it.
Comment Written by Block on 20-Oct-2015

Life (Now and Then) by ~Dovey

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This poem says so much in so little words. It is so true we as a society have become enslaved by all the progress of machinery and technology. Yes I believed it all has helped us but also it has made us lose our selves because now of days we depend on it so much to the point some of us can not live without it. Very nice written and very strong...
Comment Written by Block on 20-Oct-2015

Prom Dress by paperwait

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I thought this poem was cute even thought it seems a little sad because the writer didn't' get as to the dance and had to sell the dress. Personally I would have went to the prom anyway if not to just hang out and have a good time, you never know there might have been someone there was alone to...Very nice.
Comment Written by Block on 20-Oct-2015

Snow Leopard by Alan K Pease

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First as an animal lover I love the pic of the White Leopard sitting up all strong and distinguish. I also love your strong metaphors and the way you described the winter cold and the warmth of the fireplace. The writer makes you see and feel the cold winter snow. I think the poem was beautifully written.
Comment Written by Block on 20-Oct-2015

To Cherish Thorns by michaelcahill
Chapter 3 of the book Free Verse Collection 2

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I really liked how strong your metaphor are. The way you described the ocean and the ripples makes you feel like you are there with the memories of your past. I think the poem was lovely written and also written with passion from the heart. When we write with passion it really makes the reader feel one the writer is feeling. Very good job.
Comment Written by Block on 20-Oct-2015

Late Arrivals and Farty Chairs by snodlander
Chapter 32 of the book Finding Daisy

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I really liked this story and found it very interesting. I enjoyed reading it and found it very easy to read. I can't wait to go back and read the earlier chapters so I can learn more about Mr and miss Davenport. Ess seems a little sneaky, I want to know more about her character also. Great story so far.
Comment Written by Block on 03-Sep-2014


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