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Consciousness Flows by BeasPeas
Chapter 35 of the book Keeping the Faith

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An excellent nonet, Marilyn. It is written in the perfect form. You have a very good message in it. Good luck in the contest.

teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 23-Mar-2018

Flamenco Dance by Dolly'sPoems

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Nice form that you wrote this in. I like all the inline rhymes.

Very descriptive and I could easliy picture this dancer.

teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 23-Mar-2018

The Day Shift by Gloria ....

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I like the way you included several different things - rose's blossoms, eagles fishing, bustling highway,etc - to make up the 'day shift'. Everything has its work to do.

Nicely done, gloria.

teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 23-Mar-2018

~Urges~ by Dean Kuch

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This is indeed unlike your usual writing Dean. You had me all heated up for sure. But then with the teeth and blood part, I thought it may be more vampire than erotica. But either way, excellent writing.

teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 23-Mar-2018

Families at War by Mustang Patty
Chapter 37 of the book Poetry 2018

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Political conversations can be a way to lose friends (and customers for me - lol).

Line 4 should have 6 syllables and only has 5.

If you change it, let me know and I will change the star rating. Since it is for a contest, that is the reason I give the 4 stars.
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 23-Mar-2018

Immunity by Joan E.

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I did not know about the mumps outbreak until someone I know had them. I was born in 1961 and never had the mumps. Maybe I should look into a booster shot. Sometimes, Joan, there are positives to being old:)

Teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 23-Mar-2018

I Got Two Stars by Sasha

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Explaining low star ratings is always best. I am glad that person was polite in giving his/her opinions. Your style of writing is unique. I like it but it may not be for everyone. My style of poetry is unique and many do not like it. I am with you - I write for me.

Teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 21-Mar-2018

How it started... by robina1978
Chapter 1 of the book Our marriage

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Ah, you are getting started on your book, putting your writings into it. I wish you well with the Ine. It will be a good memory for you.

teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 21-Mar-2018

Now I Lay Me Down to Weep by Dean Kuch

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Very intriguing, creepy and scary .... and unfortunately too true in too many cases.

Excellent writing. Great imagery (of course), great alliteration, rhyme and meter.

teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 20-Mar-2018

Slow Reading by l.raven

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I have always been a slow reader. I am one that has to read every word in order to comprehend. You could have been writing this about me. Thanks for writing what you did.
teresa
Comment Written by TAB_that's me on 20-Mar-2018


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