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Towel! by Solitude Poet

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Good 5-7-5. I like the way you put the wording. A comedian...
he turned.

Clever and cute. Good job!

Thanks for sharing and good luck
Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

Stringless Acceptance by Cookie333

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Lovely words. Strong, powerful first line, and it doesn't stop there. The piece sends a message about faith and its power

I love the imagery.
Very inspiring. Thank you for sharing.

Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

I Got An Invitation by adewpearl

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This is great! Wonderful rhyme. Such clever verse. I love the story you tell in your poem.

Adorable imagery. Thank you for Shang!!
Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

Slaughterhouse 101 by samandlancelot

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Chilling to think of the practice. Clever way of presenting it.

Good 5-7-5.

I agree Joker works as art, but no joke portrayed in this work.
Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

Tapestry Of Secrets by uptowngirlchef1961

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Great selection of words. Wonderful imagery. Tapestry of grand dreams, simple wishes. Really nice.

So true that we sometimes hide too much, Until that one person comes along and we share it all.

Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

If I told you, would you believe.... by Titanx9

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Quite a nice piece. I like the repeating questions. Works well for the flow. I think it flows without the commas at the end of the lines...hope that was gentle enough!

Sentiment very good. Love the ending verse.

Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

Not The Me I Used To Be by Debra White
Chapter 15 of the book Me, Myself and I 2013

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How true this sentiment is. None of us stay the me we used to be. I love that line!

Great selection of words. You have captured imagery of the tired Mom

Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

5-7-5 (neighbors kept bitching) by Cedar

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LOVE IT! Perfect 5-7-5. Clever. Authentic, for sure!!!

I think everyone loves to hear about quieting the complaining neighbor.

Great piece. Just one question....where do you get one of those gutter "spouts"?
Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

Tribute to the Old Masters by Jeanie Mercer

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Excellent! And how true. Every word, well selected. I like the Basho reference. Very clever.

I love the last verse. You have captured many writers fears in ther last verse. Mine, at least.
Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013

The Eraser II by xotic flotsam
Chapter 41 of the book An xotic Look

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A wonderful, clever work. Tells a story. But behind the story is a message, for me. Much fuss about perfection... maybe superficial. In the eyes of a child, not important.

Thanks for sharing. A fun read
Comment Written by Npenny on 25-May-2013


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