Football Chapter 12 part 2
Katherine finds out who's been watching her.
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Find Your Own Pond by Lulube

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The duck must not believe in sharing is caring, rather have all the pond water to it's self. Well written, plus give me a little giggle. Glad I stopped by.
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 23-Feb-2021

An Eagle's Tears by sammielwf

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I could imagine that the eagle is sadness by what has been seen in the country that he stands for, maybe even ashamed. Very powerful 5-75
Well written
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 11-Jan-2021

Dreamland by elchupakabra

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Oh, my goodness. It's sad there are people out there who are really going though something like this. My mom lost a friend who boyfriend stabbed her 27 times and killed her. She left kids behind.
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 29-Jul-2020

Open Eyes Fly... by rama devi

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Love is in the air. Your poem goes perfect with the city of lights gloomy in the sky. Love sometimes makes us a little gloomy too. Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 19-Jul-2020

Desert scene. by royowen
Chapter 17 of the book Renga Multi-Author Book

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Great picture of the sky and the colorful sky stands in that blue background. Words goes great with the picture. Nicely done. I would love to sit under the sky like that.
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 19-Jul-2020

It's Part Of The Job by Louise Michelle

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It's a little sad, but there are bosses out there in the world who really are like this towards women. Looks mean more then brains. I love your picture choice. Glad I stopped by I enjoyed my reading of your poem.
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 19-Jul-2020

Daydream Lover by Keyes

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I think most people have a dream lover at least once in their life. I like the little color choice. Great word choice well put together. Sometimes I wish time would stay still.


Comment Written by mbagby23 on 19-Jul-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

I Can Breathe Again by LyndaS

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I can't wait to rip of the mask. As soon as I can off it goes. Great picture to go along with the poem. Good luck in the contest. Glad I stopped by to read.
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 18-Jul-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

May I Write For You? by jaybird1

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It's not all about diamonds and big houses with all the riches. Yet, it's about the Gift that God gives one, a talent of writing which can be richer then the wealth. It gives and brings happiness to one another. Well done
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 18-Jul-2020

Precarious by zanya

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Doing stuff to build up our fourte profile is very important. Bettering our life and the one's around us. I also like the picture of the rocks building up TY o reach the top. Good luck
Comment Written by mbagby23 on 22-May-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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