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Flowering Wisdom by Gloria ....

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As I contemplate both your brilliant nonet and the accompanying illustration, I discover a scene of harmony between a man made pot and random natural growth.
Comment Written by persevere on 21-Oct-2020

Till I Return by Gloria ....

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Another one of your great poems stimulating the imagination. I love the snow being sown with seeds of spring. The pure white cardinal certainly promotes a timely destiny,
Comment Written by persevere on 11-Oct-2020

Windswept Cliffs by Gloria ....

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What I love about your work , Gloria, is that it triggers my imagination. As I sit reading your six worder the rain is falling and the wind blowing. That brilliantly portrayed, drooping sunflower reflected in the moonlight,accompanied by your words, portray the onset of autumn.
Comment Written by persevere on 04-Oct-2020

Drone by Louise Michelle

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What a unique use of tech to convey a wry sense of humour. The rhyming is straightforward and so effective and the drone looks well equipped for the detective work required.
Comment Written by persevere on 01-Oct-2020

Hoping for Pastures by Gloria ....

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Much food for thought here, written with only six words. I guess we all face challenges and the only way to deal with them is to learn the way to peaceful settlement. The Zen artwork is a perfect accompaniment.
Comment Written by persevere on 01-Oct-2020

The Clouds Withdraw by Gloria ....

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Gloria, this is a powerful sonnet. With this pandemic, the world is certainly caught in shades of gray. Concentrating on the moon's majestic slice is a lifting of the spirit to once again see the world with renewed productivity.
Comment Written by persevere on 26-Sep-2020

Bronze by Gloria ....

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Gloria, once again I am in awe of your talent. I have no need to check the required rhyming pattern. Your brilliant bronzed approach to autumn has me reaching for my cup of tea as I look out of the window for those spilt copper leaves.
Comment Written by persevere on 20-Sep-2020

When Smoke Gets in Your Eyes by Gloria ....

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This fiery sonnet enforces the feelings that a friend of mine is presently experiencing in California . Your final couplet gives hope to those affected. Thank you, once again, Gloria, for giving me an example of poetic excellence. I also pronounce fire a two syllables.
Comment Written by persevere on 10-Sep-2020

Mother Waves Goodbye by Gloria ....

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I am not familiar with the movie but this creative 5-7-5 evoked a washing line of mine. There would have been half a dozen nappies hanging there. There was no such thing as a dryer in those days!
Comment Written by persevere on 07-Sep-2020

My Editor, the Joker by Gloria ....

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What a unique way to describe one's cat.......an editorial sonnet! Gloria, you are such an inspiration for me. I am tempted to try to write a sonnet about our border collie. She doesn't ravage my writings but she is inclined to lift my hand off my iPad as I am writing a piece. Perhaps I should take note of the content of my composition at that moment.
Comment Written by persevere on 26-Aug-2020


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