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Equality by Becky Staab

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If there was such a thing as equality for all it would definitely be inspiring. A thought provoking six word poet. What aspect of life is equality being applied to?
Comment Written by persevere on 27-Feb-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Concrete Sidewalk by Gloria ....

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Daily we are instructed to keep our distance and your expressive 5-7-5 makes me wonder whether this coot is obeying the instruction. He looks distinctly isolated. Your daughter's excellent photograph tells the story.
Comment Written by persevere on 05-Feb-2021

Hold on Tight by Gloria ....

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I was drawn to read this peppered pickle piece by the Nautical Knots painting. Your metaphors are brilliantly descriptive of life. I have an album of my late nautical husband's knots.
Comment Written by persevere on 19-Jan-2021

Surrounded by Sleep by Gloria ....

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Your two liner makes me appreciate that I seldom suffer from insomnia. Your description of the sleep denied island conjures up the picture of an isolated sailor.
Gloria, one of my new year resolutions is to increase my postings.
Comment Written by persevere on 04-Jan-2021

Waiting for Me by Gloria ....

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What an appealing lune poem, centred on destiny. Gloria, you and your daughter have created a masterpiece. I wish you a trifle belated Happy New Year and look forward to your 2021 offerings.
Comment Written by persevere on 04-Jan-2021

A Winterland Scene by Gloria ....

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An enthralling interpretation of this lovely painting. At my ripe old age I also find snow serene. Sadly our forecast is only cold icy winds.
Wishing you a happy Christmas and a covidless 2021
Comment Written by persevere on 25-Dec-2020

Little Lights in the Snow by Gloria ....

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What a nostalgic meander through the seasons of life, a sonnet of note. I also raise a glass of brandy wine to waning rays of good ole summertime.
And,Gloria, once again I am prompted to write a sonnet.
Comment Written by persevere on 16-Dec-2020

Duck Reflections by Gloria ....

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What a delightful bird wisdom poem accompanied by your daughter's charming photograph.. I am fascinated by the intriguing intelligence of birds. I have just been reading a study that is taking place about the intelligence of ravens. Apparently they are rated alongside some apes.
Comment Written by persevere on 15-Dec-2020

Indifferent by Gloria ....

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So true that a non reader lives one life! Your marriage of convenience seems inevitable under the present conditions but hopefully you have means of obtaining new books. I am reading your excellent poem, in lockdown, as the cars pass relentlessly outside on London Road.
Comment Written by persevere on 29-Nov-2020

A Walk in the Park by Gloria ....

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Intriguing though the illustration is, your sonnet alone paints the picture of remembrance of a loved one whose whisper travels through the forest. I feel like slipping a copy of your brilliant sonnet into my " The Complete Works of William Shakespeare" which was given to me by my older brother for my 13th birthday.
Comment Written by persevere on 27-Nov-2020


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