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Artistic Expression by jaybird1

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You have brilliantly and poetically described the relationship between the artist and the poet.Each does indeed express feelings and thoughts. One sets to manifest those feelings with brush and paint and the other with pen and a muse.
Comment Written by persevere on 07-Nov-2020

Snakes in spring by Wendy Gordon

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This poem takes me on a conducted tour of a snake inhabited countryside. Good advice is there and a hint that emergency treatment may be needed. You have to let someone know where and when you are going. A job well done.
Comment Written by persevere on 07-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Strange House That Smith Built by Reese Turner

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An interesting story, poetically told. Thank goodness your cellphone always accompanies you in your house on wheels. That strange structure has to be seen to be believed. I hope more poetic stories will be forthcoming on your travels.
Comment Written by persevere on 07-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

haiku (a rusty sign) by Gloria ....

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You certainly trigger my emotion in this haiku, something which I failed to do in my latest attempt. So, you see, you are helping me open new doors. I hope you are keeping well.
Comment Written by persevere on 03-Nov-2020

Halloween Murder Mystery by Gloria ....

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Thank you for your hilarious Halloween entertainment, Gloria. I have also had a bit of fun......how about " Murder by Sworc", a sworc being a new type of sword.
Comment Written by persevere on 02-Nov-2020

War of the Seasons by Gloria ....

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Your 5-7-5 is another thought provoking piece, accompanied by a stunning surrender of the oaks. I guess graceful surrender to what cannot be overcome is a good life lesson.
Comment Written by persevere on 27-Oct-2020

The Snow Moon by Gloria ....

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I love your poetic rendering of the unusually early snowfall. The winter boots were delighted but sandals seemed to have one more outing. We seldom have much snow but the unusual could happen so I will dig out my socks for my remaining foot.
Comment Written by persevere on 27-Oct-2020

Flowering Wisdom by Gloria ....

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As I contemplate both your brilliant nonet and the accompanying illustration, I discover a scene of harmony between a man made pot and random natural growth.
Comment Written by persevere on 21-Oct-2020

Till I Return by Gloria ....

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Another one of your great poems stimulating the imagination. I love the snow being sown with seeds of spring. The pure white cardinal certainly promotes a timely destiny,
Comment Written by persevere on 11-Oct-2020

Windswept Cliffs by Gloria ....

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What I love about your work , Gloria, is that it triggers my imagination. As I sit reading your six worder the rain is falling and the wind blowing. That brilliantly portrayed, drooping sunflower reflected in the moonlight,accompanied by your words, portray the onset of autumn.
Comment Written by persevere on 04-Oct-2020


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