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First Contact by sandramitchell
Chapter 2 of the book Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4

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Hello Sandramitchell,
What a FANTASTIC piece of General Fiction this is!
It has impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous, highly captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicts the theme.
The most remarkable part is 'Presentation of Eric as a Character, and A brief synopsis.'
Interesting INDEED, and I'm eagerly waiting for the next Part.
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 25-Feb-2020

The Letter by thaities

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Hello Thaities,
MARVELOUS piece of General Flash Fiction meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and transparently depicting its theme.
Superb!
Best of Luck!!
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 25-Feb-2020

The Last Time by livelylinda

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Hello livelylinda,
What a MARVELOUS piece of Commentary and Philosophy Fiction this is!
It has an impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme wording, meets the required norms, and beautifully depicts its theme 'especially the character of Charlie'.
Smooth, spontaneous, and highly captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
SUPERB!
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 25-Feb-2020

St. Louis Chapter 23 part 1 by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 54 of the book St Louis

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Hello barbara.wilkey,
It's a lovely piece of Romance Fiction in continuation having lucid wording, smooth, and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
What I like most is the conversational approach.
Interesting, and compels the reader to wait for the next part.
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 25-Feb-2020

I Couldn't Love You More by Irish Rain

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Hello Irish Rain,
Charming piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 25-Feb-2020

A Promise by the Old Oak Tree by Gideon300

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Hello Gideon300,
Lovely piece of General Fiction having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme wording, smooth, and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
"The waitress sat the coffee in front of me. "Girl trouble?" ....downward up to the end is especially noteworthy.
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 25-Feb-2020

The Fisherman's Son-Fifty by Ulla
Chapter 50 of the book The Fisherman's Son

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This work has reached the exceptional level

Hello Ulla,
Nice piece in continuation having smooth, spontaneous, and captivating flow throughout, especially from "Hold on, Andrew,... to downward up to the end - "There was no sign of Andrew."
The End, as usual, is immensely striking, and I like your this style most.
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 25-Feb-2020

Vacation Trials by lauralumummu

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This work has reached the exceptional level

Hello lauralumummu,
Keeping in mind 'Non-Fiction, and the Title + Related Words', it's an outstanding example of Non-Fiction.
First 2-3 Paragraphs describing beauty of the place, and then the unexpected tragic part , both are marvelous from the viewpoint of phraseology, presentation, and captivating flow throughout up to the end.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 21-Feb-2020

Motorcycle Flight by Gideon300

Exceptional
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Hello Gideon300,
Lovely piece of General Fiction in the form of 'Flash Fiction' meeting the desired norms, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive, and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, and captivating 'Non-Stop' flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
""Weeee!" I shouted as I sailed off the edge and into the expanse of blue sky."
Marvelous!
&
Best of Luck!!

Comment Written by RPSaxena on 21-Feb-2020

Spring Comes Soon by JLR

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Hello JLR,
It's a nice piece of poetry having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, and transparently depicting the theme.
Smooth, spontaneous, and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The line "tree buds strain to soon boom" is particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!
Comment Written by RPSaxena on 21-Feb-2020


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