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NicciFaye

Last Call by C.J. 16
Chapter 18 of the book Laughing Gas

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Well we've all been there...LOl...Though mine wasn't the exact poetic story that you've so well expressed...the ending of just being able to think is true and through. This stirred up memories from when I was in the Army. Thanks for sharing this..
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 16-Apr-2016

A Pure Outstanding Soul by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 16 of the book NaPoWriMo challenge for April 2016

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Sandra - this is a well composed Pantoum. These are pretty challenging to write, but you've done a great job in my opinion. You've also provided some spiritual insight and wisdom to the reader. I enjoyed.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 16-Apr-2016

My Mind's in False Key by kathleenspalding

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Hello Kathleen. I was partially raised in Tampa where I graduated High school from in 97. I think it's great that you are promoting and encouraging people to participate in the False Key short stories. I've considered several times, as this is not the first time I've read this poem. Though I think I subconsciously am afraid because of previous entries I've submitted to various websites have not succeeded. Though I've been told by many people I should submit some of my writings to different publishers. I appreciate this.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 15-Apr-2016

It Doesn't Matter To ME by misscookie

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Very nice Miss Cookie. I know Sandra appreciates your positive encouragement and uplift. This poem is beautiful in thought, word, and deed. Many blessings to you Miss Cookie. Keep writing.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 15-Apr-2016

The Gate by MelB

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Poignant and heart tearing Mel. Great write. Deep, personal, and tragic. An excellent writing to depict your essence of what this picture brought to your muse when it comes to writing.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 14-Apr-2016

Milkweed and Monarchs by Jmf4119

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This is wonderful. Informing and educational. I love poems like this. You teach in a creative fashion. They rhyme was through and through and flowed exceptionally smooth. The additional author notes were detailed and good for further reference. Thank you for sharing this. Many blessings. ~NF~
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 14-Apr-2016

Lunatic Line by Lulube

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Hey Lulube! This is definitely chippy! The picture, at least in my mind, really allows this reader to set the tone of the poem. Having a dog and knowing how they act when they are happy, I found this quite funny as I read it.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 14-Apr-2016

Don't Talk by Chris Walker

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The power of few great words will say a lot. This is what you've done here! Your micro poem has a big message about disagreement, arguing, or ....silence is golden. Many blessings to you in this contest.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 14-Apr-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Frontier Justice - Part Two by c_lucas
Chapter 15 of the book VIOLENT REUNION

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Action packed Charlie! Great Great chapter. Excellent descriptions and fights. Interesting transition from Bridgt into others for protection. The cliff hanger at the end will be sure to have this reader coming back. Did someone shot the deputy? Maybe it was one of the guys....I don't have six stars to award this!

He was tearing off her clothes when Milo used his gun barrel to give him a good night kiss (great imagery)
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 14-Apr-2016

The All-Nighter by Jay Squires
Chapter 30 of the book THE TRINING Book Three

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Jay Axtilla arrival has be on edge! This was a GREAT read. Excellent descriptions and build-up of her coming. You have created such an amazing space for this to happen. Now to wait and see what the outcome will be is like sitting on pins and needles!
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016


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