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I Wish by GWHARGIS

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This was so needed. I wish all girls would understand, but I believe that this is part of a flower maturing from it's seed, budding, blooming, and opening up so the world can see as you stated. ...this was so needed.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016

Masterpiece in the Sky by GregoryCody

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Hi Gregory. Long time. A wonderful 3 line poem for this content. The opening alliteration of "e" is nice. The continuation of this poem is smooth. The closing line is a great mental imagery. I enjoyed.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016

The Public's Hero by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Powerfully encouraging Dawn. I work with a lot of veteran's that have PTSD and it's no joke. A lot of people don't realize that PTSD just doesn't happen from war but from traumatic experiences from our childhood, accidents, and so forth. This is a resonating read. I thank you for sharing this and I know Patrick appreciates it.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016

Have A Seat by Rookette

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Nice to read you Rookette. I enjoyed this...at first I thought you were talking about a dog, but nope. I enjoyed it still. A fun and light read. Simple rhyme. An excellent entry for the contest. Many blessings. ~NF~
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016

Taken Away by Word Junkie

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Damn...that actually gave me chills...what a poetic tale. Fanstory is hot tonight! I've read a couple of poetic pieces that have been thrilling. This is unbelievable real as told to the reader. You did a magnificent job with this poem. Truly. I would give it a ten but I don't even have a six. Excellent.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Death comes for him by Alissa doug

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Very alluring in thought and gloomy as it should be. Descriptive and creative, destructive and light-filled in a swoop of a poem. An enjoyable read and a interesting perspective you've told it from.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016

Please tell me... by royowen

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He is all in all the Lord our God. Jehovah jireh. Abba. I admire your poetry because you express the goodness of our Lord in multitudes of ways, themes, and divine seeds. This is a un-perishable talent that only God himself would've been able to bestow into you. Excellent write.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016

The Gardener by Eric1

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Eric this was a delightful write. The rhyme was simple and beautiful. The content and theme of this poem was divine. I love how you told this poetic story. A tranquil state of mind expressed in a wonderful thought of the .....garden.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016

Pain by Eternal Muse

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Wow Yeltel...this is beyond powerful. To express pain in such a elaborate and eloquent way. I am actually at a lost of words to express the beauty of this creative presentation you've shared. I don't have a six to award this piece.
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 13-Apr-2016

The Bridge by Dutchie

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Yes Fia! Yes! A message...a beautiful and encouraging poetic wisdom you've provided for readers. I enjoyed this poem. The message is true and clear. If we got held up every time some one threw a stone, we would be caged in our own minds!
Comment Written by NicciFaye on 12-Apr-2016


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