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Driving to the Past by Finglas

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This is a beautiful work. I can appreciate the imagery of this! I particularly love the last paragraph!!!!! One complaint would be that some of the rhymes are not exact.
Comment Written by DRG24 on 27-Dec-2014

The Ten Cent Novel Part One by c_lucas
Chapter 15 of the book THE TRAVELS OF CHARLES RIGHTER

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I think the fact that you used the idea of back stabbing people vs non back stabbers to be intriguing. I do love the diction that you used throughout your chapter.
Comment Written by DRG24 on 27-Dec-2014

It was written.... by royowen

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I love this amazing poem!!! The rhyming is flawless!!! I love the quote within it as well. Why did you not have the rhyming scheme be ABAB?
Comment Written by DRG24 on 27-Dec-2014

I Am A Horror Writer by Dean Kuch

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I really love this poem! The image at the end was quite chilling, but I feel like this poem really fits you as a writer. The imagery of this poem is amazing.
Comment Written by DRG24 on 27-Dec-2014

Darling Miss Muppet by royowen

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This is an awesome poem! I love the whimsical rhyming and short nature of it! The photo also pairs amazingly with the poetry! Nice!
Comment Written by DRG24 on 25-Dec-2014

The Coming of Change, Part Two by c_lucas
Chapter 14 of the book THE TRAVELS OF CHARLES RIGHTER

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I love the plot of this story! It is amazing! I love the dynamics between all of the characters, especially Pierre! The author notes are very helpful.
Comment Written by DRG24 on 25-Dec-2014

Silence Of Snow by PoeticXscape

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The poetic nature of this! Ahhh it is beautiful! I just love the imagery that you convey within this piece! Great diction!
Comment Written by DRG24 on 25-Dec-2014

Sunday, Monday, Doomsday. . . by Jawa78

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Nice Story! I liked most of it with the plot and the theme. Personally, i dislike this phrase "attractive 30 plus US mother of two," as it seems quite informal. Also, there are several spelling errors. For example, comandderr. If you change these e id love to rerate
RERATE: 5 ok i get it
Comment Written by DRG24 on 05-Mar-2014
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Secrets in the Void - part 2 by Liandra
Chapter 17 of the book ERTEISIA

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This story is amazing!!!!!!! I love the last line as it preserves a mood of mystery!!! Congratulations on your wonderful work!
Comment Written by DRG24 on 16-Jan-2014

Underwater, With Stars Collapsing by Day Z Chayn
Chapter 58 of the book Kilroy Was Here!

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This is an intriguing poem yet I do not necessarily understand it!!!!!!! Oh, well. From what I can glean off it, It seems full of imagery and life
Comment Written by DRG24 on 16-Jan-2014


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