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Broke(n) by ravenblack

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Yikes! You Really pulled this out of a wonderful, mysterious place.
My absolute favorite stanza is...'my tin cup full of pencils rattling to scribe love letters to a ghost..emotive and hauntingly romantic. A work you should be proud of. Loved this.
Quillian
Comment Written by Quillian on 19-Sep-2013

Solitude's Whispers by Maureen's Pen
Chapter 61 of the book Whispers of Spirit

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Maureen, Congratulations on your win with this lovely piece. Perfectly executed with your deft hand at alliteration, that second line sounds like wind. Quillian
Comment Written by Quillian on 19-Sep-2013

Reincarnation by Spitfire

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Congratulations on your win! This is a great piece and am looking forward to more on the subject. Perfect art...
Quillian
Comment Written by Quillian on 19-Sep-2013

Five Hundred Words by Rondeno

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I like the concept and the jazzy finger-poppin' style of this piece. It's good to read such creative original work, here. A couple of my favorites ...born on yeasty taproom breath..and turkey on a tin roof.. This was a pleasure to read.
Comment Written by Quillian on 19-Sep-2013

The world In a 1000 years by joneau2

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This was eerie and original. The utter devastation of the outside world was handled well here and I thought his thoughts of suicide would be an appropriate reaction. Would make a good expanded story.
Comment Written by Quillian on 18-Sep-2013

No-No Lisa Brown by E Vin Smyth

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No-No Lisa Brown. What a hoot. And I cannot imagine how you found the Mo-No Lisa picture! This was a clever little ditty that mad me smile, 'Red'.
Comment Written by Quillian on 18-Sep-2013

Ice-Age Days by LateBloomer

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Too funny, too true! I can relate with this later day lament. If I may, I would suggest a word change on 'props' in your last line? Maybe 'ice pack blocks'? See what you think..........cute commentary on those Ch-ch-ch-changes we are going through....Quillian
Comment Written by Quillian on 18-Sep-2013

Now I Lay Me by justmarly

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This is exactly why a woman scorned is a dangerous and volatile animal. Taking this sweet little bedtime prayer and making into a nightmare was a kick in the head! Your line,
..he's the cause my heart is broke, it's only fair for him to croak... made me laugh out loud.
In your last line you have spelled guilt as quilt, need to fix that. A funny, irreverent and twisted poem...
Comment Written by Quillian on 18-Sep-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

What Is Death? by IndianaIrish

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Nice work. Those childhood questions and learning the shocking truths are such a common ground for us all. This will resonate with every reader. I'm not sure having her lose her puppy made it easier to read or harder. I had a solid emotional response
to your piece.
Comment Written by Quillian on 18-Sep-2013

Senryu (now the knot is tied) by kiwisteveh

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Congratulations on your win. Your senryu once again shows us that the everyday things that happen to us, when pared down by a poet are the most profound and moving.
Comment Written by Quillian on 18-Sep-2013


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