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Walking Man by Irish Rain

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Oh how I wish for six to give on this one! So beautifully written, and so very true. I hope you do not mind if I bookmark this, it is so lovely I know I will want to revisit it. Thank you for sharing this...blessings to you...Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 08-May-2018

Daffodils by Irish Rain

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What a sight for sore eyes. I have surely missed reading your work! This is beautifully written, I love everything about it.

I hope all has been going well for you, I know you've been missed here on Fanstory. Blessings...Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 08-Apr-2018

We were born... by royowen

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Hi, Roy. This is such a beautiful truth, and the world needs to hear it. Excellent use of rhyme and alliteration. I am always in awe of your ability to deliver God's truth in such a smooth, flowing manner. Happy Easter, God bless!... Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 31-Mar-2018

Now if you trust... by royowen

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I'd love to give you a six for this, it is exactly what I needed to read today! I enjoyed the rhyme, flow, alliteration, but especially the message, as it perfectly addressed something I've been praying about in my own life. Thank you for sharing, Roy. Blessings to you and your family... Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 17-Mar-2018

Remember... by royowen

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Beautiful, Roy. That third verse spoke to me personally, although I enjoyed it in its entirety.

Oh and there are a couple of extra letters in the title....Blessings to you... Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 27-Feb-2018

Morning Sun by Alexander E Poet
Chapter 75 of the book Poems by Alexander E Poet

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Good use of rhyme and rhythm in this. Yes, the sun is a beautiful example of God's handiwork.

I am not sure if I'm understanding correctly; through the first two verses, I assumed you were referring to Jesus, however the third verse changed that assumption, bringing to mind the worship of the sun god. I don't seek to offend or judge, just to understand where you're coming from.

When I write, I often use a reference to 'Son light' since Jesus is the light of the world. I have had others question that, thinking I meant sunlight.

Thanks for sharing. Blessings... Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 25-Feb-2018

When I was a young man... by royowen

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Rhyme and rhythm is wonderful, as usual. I really enjoyed your use of alliteration throughout. Great message, and a great read. Many blessings ...Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 25-Feb-2018

To Know A Woman by Edwin Hofert

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An enjoyable read, this flows very well. Your use of rhyme is great. I think that fifth verse has to be my favorite. It describes how we feel about men to some degree, lol. Thanks for sharing. Blessings...Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 25-Feb-2018

Riches beyond Belief by Dolly'sPoems

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Wonderful poem, I really enjoyed reading this. Of course I thought of my own grandkids when I read it. I agree that this is the most important lesson we can give them. Lovely words, and presentation. Blessings...Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 25-Feb-2018

Intoxicating Grace by easyeverett1

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I really enjoyed your use of rhyme, and especially the way your words appealed to different senses. Also the use of alliteration throughout is excellent. The flow or rhythm was so smooth throughout, but the last half of last verse seemed to be more in sync with the first half if read as 'I deeply breathe sweet garden air of rich nobility.' This is just my humble opinion, and again I really enjoyed reading. Blessings... Christy
Comment Written by crybry67 on 24-Feb-2018


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