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Cards by patcelaw

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You write so much, its getting hard for me to keep up with you! lol
This would have been a good entry for that contest! Sorry you missed it.

Very nice job by the way. When I was younger, I used to play cards all the time......I was known to cheat a time or two. But getting caught by my cousin, made me stop.....lol

Nice job
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 14-May-2015

Nocturnal Shadows by Dean Kuch

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A 5-7-5 poem at it finest!!! And I love the background and dancing image that you used. It's a perfect compliment for your poem. Which is my favorite kind, short and awesome :)

Great job as always. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 14-May-2015

I'm Too Fat by Barb Hensongispsaca

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This is incredibly sad!!! And sadly there are a lot of people who are like that. And yes it is an illness, a terrible illness. I worked with a girl who had that disorder, it was very sad. I would never wish that on anyone. Society is really hurting our youth. Especially our young girls. Unrealistic body images and fat shaming is just awful.

Well done
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 14-May-2015

Exercise by victor 66

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Hilarious!!!! That was me a little while ago. I hate exercising but because of my health I had to start. I would just watch people.....lol

It's just awful and plus I don't like to sweat!!!


Very funny and cute!

Good luck
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 12-May-2015
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Jesus by patcelaw

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Just call on him and he will answer! Seems simple, yet tons of people
are unable to do it. They make it much more difficult than it has to be.
I love faith based poems. In the world we live in today, it seems as if a lot
of people have turned their backs on God. And a lot of people make it seem
like believing in God and being Christian is crazy! I don't get it.

Very nice job :)
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015

haiku (lilac bouquet) by IndianaIrish

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Treasured keepsake indeed! I do miss my Grandmother!
Especially this past Mother's Day. She was my Step-Grandmother.
My Maternal Grandmother passed away in 1970 before my siblings
and I were born. None of us got to met her. So Grandfather remarried
a woman named Lilian. She was truly the only Grandmother we knew
and she was lovely.

Very nice poem and congrats on winning the contest.

Lovely as always
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015

senru(children leave fast food) by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 11 of the book Let's Laugh 3

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That picture is priceless!!! And it freaking hilarious!
I don't waste food either, lol.
I'm the most frugal person on the planet.
I try not to waste anything.

I loved your poem. Great entry. Good luck
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015
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Betrayed by I am Cat

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Excellent poem about betrayal! It is an awesome entry for the contest.
I think at some point in our lives, we have all been betrayed.
It is such an awful feeling.

"You ate my blood and spit on me" That is my favorite line. Very powerful.

Good luck in the contest
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015
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Greed is the Drive by Glasstruth

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People don't vote because they don't think there vote counts or matters. They think rich people are in control and that are the ones who decide the election.

I think poor don't vote because a lot of them are discouraged to. They have to take buses to get out the polls. No means to get there.

Some people just don't think things will change.

But how can things change will people don't vote or voice opinions? When they do voice their opinion, the election has already been decided........they simply wait to long

Very informative poem. It really made me think and it is so very true.
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015

Roses are red by valerieellis

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Wow!!!! This is an amazing poem and so very powerful!
It really affected me because when I was little, my father
used to hit my Mother. He was a scary man.

But when people were around, he would always dote on her.
It was sickening. It was like he had two personalities.

Years after she divorced him, she was still affected by the hurt,
pain, and humiliation. But in time, she healed an she's in a great place
now. She's awesome!

Your poem is fantastic. Filled with so much emotion. Great job
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015
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