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Felix by Bill Schott
Chapter 35 of the book People

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This is hilarious and very creative! My favorite line is when Felix ate a pretend jar of jelly. That made me laugh so hard. I really needed that. This has not been the best day!

Great job as always and thanks for the laughs
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015

Adolescent Stars by BLACKDYKE

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This reminded my of the way my stepdaughter used to be a few years ago. Sometimes she is still like that. She's 17 now but sometimes I forget because she seems so innocent and clueless....lol

Your poem is well written and a lot of it rings true. Good job
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015
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Cracked by Sis Cat

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Poetry I messy and I have no idea what I am doing!!!! lol
I have never considered myself a poetry writer but now that I have joined this site, I have been trying. Not sure how I'm doing, but I keep going at it.

I loved your poem. Excellent insight and wonderful comparison.

Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015

They Make Excellent Corpses by papa55mike

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It was a long poem and at first I was like, "No, this is too long." Lol, but I decided to give it a chance and it was very good. The picture is part of why I read it. I thought it was interesting and creepy at the same time. I am not fond of those things......I've watched too many movies I guess.

Your poem was good and so very true. It seems as if we are living in a world where people have turned their backs on God. It's like being a Christian or believing in God is a bad thing. It's very sad.

Very nice job
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015
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Saigon by K. Lorraine

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I am glad to know this was fictional. It was incredibly intense and it kept me on my toes. I actually wanted it to keep going. It was very good. Incredibly descriptive and engaging.

Very nice job
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015
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Love's heroes. by royowen

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Very sweet and touching and I loved it! There is nothing better than a Mother's love. I am 34 years old and I am very much still a Momma's baby, lol! I do believe I have the world's greatest Mom! I love everything about her, especially the way she smells and I love, love to hug her. She has been wearing white diamonds for as long as I can remember. That is my favorite scent.

She always talks about my Grandmother and how we would have loved her and how she would have enjoyed and loved us. She passed way in 1970. My siblings and I never got the chance to met her. I can tell that really hurts my Mother.

If I could ever go back in time, I would go back and meet my Grandmother and thank her for having my Mother.

Your poem is simply just lovely.
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 11-May-2015

I sing my song by Chris Tee

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Very sweet! You keep singing your song because it is indeed good!
The normal here to me is that even through difficult times, the love is still there and going strong. You don't give up when things get a little rough. You hold on and you continue to love. Very nice :)
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 09-May-2015

Musings of a Child by Nosha17

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As I child, I always asked why! I could be overwhelming....lol!
It has carried over with me into adulthood. I always ask why or question things
I don't understand. Especially when I was a student. I was never afraid to ask questions. Because if you don't ask, you'll never know.

Your poem I just lovely. It was a complete joy to read.
I only wished it was a little longer.

Great job
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 09-May-2015

The Hammer of Meditation (5 7 5) by padumachitta

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Construction Karma Indeed! lol

Very good word play and a nice entry for the 5-7-5 contest.

Did you find the picture first or after you wrote the poem?
It's a perfect compliment with your poem.

Very nice and good luck in the contest.

We have a lot in common. I love animals, Dogs and horses are my favorite. And I love chocolate. Nice picture of your pup :)
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 09-May-2015

I Would Like This In My Life by Bryana

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You are not asking for much and I hope
you are given what you have asked for.
That is a very humble list and I love it.

Your poem is very sweet and kind.
It really touched me.

Very nice job
Comment Written by costellsgirl33 on 09-May-2015


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