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Personal Architecture by Joan E.

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Hi Joan
You have written two very clever senryus. I particularly love the second one.
life's story
searching for stability
framing each scene
The image is fantastic. Well done, I rate this a six. Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 30-Apr-2017

Life Can Be Sweet by Joan E.

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Hi Joan
I love your poem with only a few words you have lifted my spirits. I am struggling at present with my knee, a botched operation. Yet I am keeping positive and planning to go to France to celebrate my daughters 50th, My other two daughter with me. I will not be full on fanstory for a while, just tipping and tapping. Oh by the way check out the main page RGSTAR has used another one of my paintings, you asked me to tell you that. I hope you are enjoying Easter, Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 17-Apr-2017

Insight by RGstar

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Hi RG, (Roy)
I love your poem and it is is so timely to post it on Easter Sunday. As usual your chosen words and deep insight and also knowledge of the English language is exceptional.

A gate by my side-- of The Carpenter's wood, its path roaming free
An evening walk as you clamber, though its guardian fail to see
Yet, come a day you'll find it open, when for you, a Kingdom be
And if by chance should glance as you enter, that tree beside, is me

Your poetry is the best words in the best order.

A joy to read, Thanks again for sharing it and for using my painting. Mary















Comment Written by Jackarrie on 17-Apr-2017

Homecoming by Sis Cat

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Hi Sis Cat,

I like this poem, Chihuahua Mina homecoming in Mexico. I never knew this is where they originated from. I do find all breeds of dogs interesting, and also the history of them. It is difficult to imagine that they all were from the wolf. Kudos to RG he is a Gem,

Well done Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 14-Apr-2017

I'm Not Afraid by Nikki-Nicole

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Hi Nicci

I can see where your found solace, in feeling that you can call on God in your time of need. I see all my family do the same. I personally am not convinced. Well written

Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 14-Apr-2017

Torticollis by Nikki-Nicole

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Hi,

this is a well written poem about a very painful condition. One that is with you everyday and in everything you do. I know what it is like to live with pain, after a neck operation after an accident. lower spine fusion. the latest is a knee arthroscopy that has gone wrong. I battle with depression, but have managed to keep it at bay until recently I am trying not to let it take over. It is so difficult to live in constant pain. I go to bed with an ice pack on my knee and a hot water bottle on my back, and gel on my neck. My heart goes out to you.

Well written and expressed. I rate it a six. Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 13-Apr-2017

Cat's Purring is a Message by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 15 of the book Let's Laugh 6

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I love animals, and cats in particular. I cannot have one because of my travelling. But I often mind my daughters cat when she is away. I enjoyed your poem, I know my daughter would too.

Well done
Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 13-Apr-2017

Sanzaru (Three Monkeys) by Badger_29

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HI,
I enjoyed your poem about the three monkeys, and the picture is just perfect. I have them sitting on my dresser. I found your notes very informing about the history of these three. There is so much evil in the world it is difficult not to see. We do have to protect ourselves from effects it has on our minds and body especially when we cannot do anything about it. Gandi had a philosophy of peace and I see why he carried them around. But can we really ignore all the evil that is happening? Thanks for sharing Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 13-Apr-2017

Banquet of the senses by Pearl Edwards
Chapter 10 of the book THIRTY PIECES OF POETRY

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Hi Valda
I love your poem it is so well written and the image you have chosen is just perfect for it.

Each night is colourfully different
and our senses feast upon this banquet.

Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 13-Apr-2017

Stop the Clock by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 8 of the book Picture This Challenge

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Hi sandra

I enjoyed reading your poem about time. It is so true that time waits for no one. We must enjoy the moment as we will never see it again. Well done with the rhyming.
Mary
Comment Written by Jackarrie on 13-Apr-2017


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