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My Friend Butterfly by Bryana

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It's cute. I really saw the beauty of the butterfly in it.
Thank you for the Spanish translation even if I can't understand it. I know that you know the feeling of being confident or proud in speaking in a different language, even if you don't know the meaning. That is what I felt. *laughs*

Thank you for sharing your work. I enjoyed it. May God bless you all.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

The ABCs of Food by charlyann

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I like it. I really do. It's fun, creative and smart. You got two thumbs up.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

My dearest friend by fairy77

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I like it. But, I think the first line has only four syllables. I gave it five stars, because I saw great potential in you.

Thank you for sharing it. May God bless you all.

And because you changed it, I'll extend my review.

You're smart, indeed, to be able to cure your work.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Angel In My Presence by Block
Chapter 20 of the book Poetry From The Heart

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The essence the poem is not limited. It's moving. I like the way that it stayed simple, yet it still means a lot.
Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Unloved by Jackarrie

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It's fantastic. I assure you that you are not unloved. I love you. I love your work. And the best thing we all should know: God loves us.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Meadow Muffins by Cookie333

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It made me laugh and be amazed
At your smart and funny poem I gazed.
The precious rhymes at the end
Makes my laughter come, not trend.

It is very cute. *laughs* Artistic. Bravo!
A clever interpretation and entry.

Thank you for sharing it. May God bless you.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Crimson by bayoupoet

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I like it. I really do. It's creative. The way you expresses it is just good. It's clean and clear. I saw purity in there. Thank you for sharing it. May God bless you all.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 01-Jun-2013

A Purple Puddle by adewpearl

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Wow! What a twist! Very creative! Then, you should add five stars in the purple mixture *laughs* May God bless you. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 01-Jun-2013

I Pray by Righteous Riter

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Great! I love it. I love God and you helped me strengthen my life and my faith. I judged your work through what my soul had seen and will forever see. Thank you for that feeling...for sharing this work. Thnak you God. May God bless you all.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 01-Jun-2013

Together Forever by Dorothy Farrell

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Wonderful! Now, I'm inspired to have a love life that is everlasting. Like God's love. It is something that has no limits. You made me think that my parents will surely have each other until the end...until they reach another beginning. I believe in that. Thank you. May God bless you.
Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 01-Jun-2013


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