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Echoes of Love by Jannypan (Jan)

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Your poem reads with a lilt that I like the sound of. It talks of the temptation to reminisce. So easy to wallow in memories and sentimentalities. The shape of the poem is great and in tune with the sound of it. Nice work here on emotive love.
Comment Written by watergirl on 20-Sep-2018

Retail Therapy by LynSys

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I find it quite difficult to render a poem in just three lines, but you did it here.
The picture is great, and yes, there is no other choice than to come home.
A quaint little poem indeed. It wraps it up really. Shopping can't last forever. Maybe we should think more about it......
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018

Once Upon a Throne by Sandra blair

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Yes I did like your description of the girl who imagines she is a queen, and having to sit up straight for her haircut. It is quite like that, and the poem reads quite dreamily until you say snip snip, the quick snap of the scissors, a contrast here that works.
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018

Famous by meeshu

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Yes, I liked your poem about what being famous can mean. You lived a life, uncelebrated perhaps but one with options. Your friend lost that opportunity and although we say they are heroes that die for one's country, it is injustice indeed.
you put this well and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Earth's Sky at Night by Cindy McIntyre

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You have lit up the night sky for me. Although the sky is dark at night, you are right; it is full of pieces of light and the light body of the moon. It is easy to read, hangs well together and is a pleasure. You made me want to go out this very next night and watch it. !!
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018

Autumn Winds Beckon by Mrs. KT

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Yes, the onset of autumn surely brings both beautiful observations and yearnings for other times. Both sides of autumn are felt here by the reader, you put it well.
This poem sits together tightly and you have painted a picture of autumn that draws us to it's qualities. Nice.
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018

Anger's Antidote by Cindy McIntyre

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Yes, for a very short poem this says much. The picture is entirely appropriate, the burning flames of anger that devour whatever it touches. The antidote is ofcourse love. You did well to put this so concisely. Well done here.
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018

It's Up To Strangers by victortouche

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HI I really liked this; would have perhaps given it six stars but I thought the first part either misspelt or confused; Mention's and fall's ? should be without the apostrophe?
The last bit rent out......just perfect, it resonated with the human condition, we are prone to fear, hanging on too tight and with counting. I thought it excellent for that reason; your abstract way of putting this notion is wonderful. Very interesting to read, as all good poems should be. Nice. !!
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018

Imagination by Sergeant Floyd

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Love this; the conversation is the highlight of this little episode, not the story book. Life happens while we are thinking about it, is what came to mind for me. A real glimpse into the child and their appetite for adventure and imagination. Wonderful.
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018

Journey of the Hasardeux by WildWithWords

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HI I liked your poem about the ship and the dilemma it was facing, the passion of the captain is well illustrated and we can feel his urgency. You portray it well, the poem relates to the picture , I can feel the oncoming storm and the apprehension those on the ship must have felt. Good work.
Comment Written by watergirl on 19-Sep-2018


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