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Paul Sienicki

Artful (5-7-5) by SueZen

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I love the idea of bringing creativity and authenticity into an artful dance through which an innate gift in all of us can be expressed. Well done.
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 25-Sep-2016

I've never been to...... by lindafisher

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I loved your poem from the start. It is an attention grabber I must say. A story line with each stanza creating curiosity for the resolution. I missed another verse, a concluding moral of the story somehow. It would have been a 6 shiniest star for me . Thank you great work.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 18-Jun-2016

Near Death by SueZen

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Subtly significant. How sublime your poem feels, exposing one fundamental truth about us, humans. The yearning for the presence, especially in the face of approaching absence. And you wonderfully resolved your reflection on subtle significance of an oncoming departure of your loved one, by a way of "connecting to soul". Thank you, it was a pleasure to read and reflect.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 17-Jun-2016

Compelled Because by BenignThing

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I love your description of the feeling of pleasure that gives creative powers to us even if we have to suffer for it, (choking).
Thanks for creativity.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 17-Jun-2016

Silence by TPAC
Chapter 37 of the book Act of Endurance

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Sorry to say but time is money, and you have too many words in describing your sentimental moods about silence. It feels like an essay rather than a poetry, I must say. Remember these days, less is more. Try to say something succinctly and to the point using picturesque language. Thanks for sharing it. Good job.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 15-Jun-2016

haiku (grey gull stands) by Val Crisson

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Thank you for posing the philosophical question on what is to be human. I think you described pertinently well. Relationally is at the very core of what is to be human. well done.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 15-Jun-2016

Water in a Wasteland: by Marcmir

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I don't know what to think of your writing. Sounds more like debunking symptematology of an old resentment one has for traditional metaphysics. it lack poetical language and expressions which is essential to the poetry. And 'piss from God' sounds awkward and irrelevant, even to the atheists. Thanks for posting.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 15-Jun-2016

How by foxangie123

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I think it was good and relevant question you have asked in your poetry. Yes. it is impossible to abandon the past that constitute our very being. Well done.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 15-Jun-2016

Trusting In Your Timing Of Exactness by Cranial Thinker

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It is a different poem. It has a story line too. But i think it has too many repetitious words such as "truest" and not enough metaphors, similes or picturesque terminology which is quintessential to poetical language. Good job.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 15-Jun-2016

Act of Becoming by LoannaLois

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What a wonderful and exquisite piece of literature, rarely found. I couldn't have expressed this innocent process of becoming myself. Simply after my heart.
Thank you, I have truly enjoyed the resonating tune of my daily becoming.
Paul
Comment Written by Paul Sienicki on 15-Jun-2016


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