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My Crazy Life by Sharon Haiste

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This sounds anything but a crazy life. Sounds peaceful and lovely. I would love to be there. The picture looks like the poem sounds. I can't think of any place I would like to be.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 24-Apr-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Fear by Sasha
Chapter 9 of the book A Leaf on the Wind

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This poor girl. You have written about her with great feeling. You have caught the fear she felt and let us the readers know how terrified she was. Very good job.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 14-Apr-2018

Live and Die for you by CC Mack

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You have really told it like it is. They are more that your pets. They become your best friend, and your children. My dog is only 11 pounds but she think she is a big dog. She is my inside door bell.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 14-Apr-2018

At Days End by nancy_e_davis
Chapter 9 of the book The beauty of Nature

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Hi Nancy, Good work. I love to read your writing. It always gives me a warm feeling. The picture you picked went beautiful with your poem. Writing sometimes heals.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 14-Apr-2018

Never Alone by nancy_e_davis
Chapter 21 of the book Spiritual poetry

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Hi Nancy, I like this very much. Sometimes I feel very much alone and I know I am not but sometimes when the house is so quite then you should listen to His voice.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 10-Apr-2018

I Survived by ExperiencingLiphe

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Your writing has hit very close to home for me. I guess I could say I have been there and done that. You are a survivor just like I am. I hope your life if wonderful now.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 26-Mar-2018

Elephant Jokes by humpwhistle

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I like your elephant jokes. I thought they were funny. In fact the whole article was well done and cute. Elephants are one of my favorite animals. To see them in the wild is amazing.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 03-Mar-2018

Oliver Twist - 3 by Dolly'sPoems

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I can't wait to read Oliver Twist in rhyme. It will be so much fun. Are you having fun writing iit. I think it would really be a challenge . Good luck.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 02-Mar-2018

Guilt by F. Wehr3

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Very well written. It is strange I wrote a story about a toe tag. My daughter died in 1998 and I wrote about the person who put the toe tag on her. Picture brought memories.
Comment Written by baustian64 on 01-Mar-2018

Blindly Typing by Dolly'sPoems

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Well done. I took typing in school too. I am not sure I should tell you this but what the heck....My first name is Shirley and one time in typing class I made the mistake of typing Shitley. There was a huge red ring around my name. We could not erase so I had to turn it in that way. .
Comment Written by baustian64 on 01-Mar-2018


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