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held my interest for the entire story. Kept me wanting to know what this was all about.
I am sure that children would enjoy reading it
Very good attempt for your first try.
Perfect syllable count for the form
great choice for the season and nicae art to aaccompany your poem
a wonderful rendition of the psalm. Great artwork to accompany the poem.
perfect syllable count for the etheree form.
god luck in the contest
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 that ha all the qualities of the form That is a flower that I always have admired and have one in a large basket at the moment
Good luck in the contest
A beautiful rendition of that psalm.
But souls like wind cannot be caught
nor can they be contained;
yet I have dreamt to bind men's hearts
and cleanse what earth has stained.LOVED this verse
Interesting right to the end. love the wist it takes but I did surmise that something was wrong. Good ending that Mack paid no attention to what was on the television.Now you have left your reader having to work out what will happen next
Are we to expect you back soon. I never got the direct message about your absence.
i miss your reviews and reading your poems
A well deserve tribute too Dean. I endorse all your sentiments as I too have interacted with Dean and found himm to be a kind hearted creature.
Thanks for the gesture
Congrats on your achievement
All the qualities of a good alouette are present and it has been a true joy to read.
Love the choice of picture
Excellent 5,5,7 5,5,7 meter
Good use of aab ccb rhymes
Great musical tone throughout this piece
well chosen picture to compliment the story