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a little wedding by judester

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held my interest for the entire story. Kept me wanting to know what this was all about.
I am sure that children would enjoy reading it
Comment Written by emrpoems on 17-Jan-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Smile by l.raven

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Very good attempt for your first try.
Perfect syllable count for the form
great choice for the season and nicae art to aaccompany your poem
Comment Written by emrpoems on 14-Jan-2016

Lighted Mirror by anabellapongasi

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a wonderful rendition of the psalm. Great artwork to accompany the poem.
perfect syllable count for the etheree form.
god luck in the contest
Comment Written by emrpoems on 14-Jan-2016

The Bleeding Heart by Ric Myworld

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Thoroughly enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 that ha all the qualities of the form That is a flower that I always have admired and have one in a large basket at the moment
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written by emrpoems on 14-Jan-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

I long to write... by royowen

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A beautiful rendition of that psalm.

But souls like wind cannot be caught
nor can they be contained;
yet I have dreamt to bind men's hearts
and cleanse what earth has stained.LOVED this verse


Comment Written by emrpoems on 14-Jan-2016

The Busy Day by Phyllis Stewart

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Interesting right to the end. love the wist it takes but I did surmise that something was wrong. Good ending that Mack paid no attention to what was on the television.Now you have left your reader having to work out what will happen next
Comment Written by emrpoems on 13-Jan-2016

A note from Brooke by adewpearl

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Are we to expect you back soon. I never got the direct message about your absence.
i miss your reviews and reading your poems
Erica
Comment Written by emrpoems on 17-Dec-2015

The Dean of scream. by royowen

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A well deserve tribute too Dean. I endorse all your sentiments as I too have interacted with Dean and found himm to be a kind hearted creature.
Thanks for the gesture
Comment Written by emrpoems on 16-Dec-2015

Days of Stone by MissMerri

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Congrats on your achievement
All the qualities of a good alouette are present and it has been a true joy to read.
Love the choice of picture
Comment Written by emrpoems on 16-Dec-2015

Wild and Free by kiwisteveh

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Excellent 5,5,7 5,5,7 meter
Good use of aab ccb rhymes
Great musical tone throughout this piece
well chosen picture to compliment the story
Comment Written by emrpoems on 16-Dec-2015


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