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Time itself is torn. by royowen

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This is a moving poem and a great tribute to a man of God.
No matter how I try to accept death I don't seem to be able to and this site seems to keep me reminded of the inevitable end.
Good use of aabb rhymes
Comment Written by emrpoems on 16-Dec-2015
Falling Leaves (Jade) by RGstar

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Good use of the aabb rhymes
Excellent use of alliteration throughout. Love the warmth and emotion woven through each line. Don't know whothe poem is written for but they seem to be both very precious people.
A true joy to read
Comment Written by emrpoems on 15-Dec-2015
What Must the World Be Thinking? by Mike Stevens

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Good use of rhymed couplets
I share your sentiments and to be honest sometimes I refused to listen to what people in these positions, or trying to attain such, have to say.Nice piece
Comment Written by emrpoems on 15-Dec-2015
Question two by Gert sherwood
Chapter 2 of the book Questions

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in His image did He comprise
from dust man and woman to rise,
to love the Earth with a mighty source
with our vital force
our souls ~
the essence of us to extol?

Loved this poem even in mixed and meter
Thought provoking
Comment Written by emrpoems on 07-Dec-2015
To the Woman from La Mancha by Pyrrho

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Great philosophical poem
love is something different to everyone.
Sweet words satisfy some while positive actions are more preferred by others. Love is being there for another in whatever way we can.
However actions speak louder than words
Comment Written by emrpoems on 07-Dec-2015
Santa and The Children by patcelaw

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I love how you do your own thing and give it a title.
That is what poetry should be. Self expressed right from the heart and in your own words and rhythm
Comment Written by emrpoems on 07-Dec-2015
The Greatest Gift by patcelaw

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You have said it perfectly.
The greatest gift anyone can receive is the gift of salvation. so many of us concentrate of these mundane gifts that its seems we forget about the real and wonderful gift from Christ Himself
Appropriate for the season
Comment Written by emrpoems on 07-Dec-2015
We Are So Sorry by JeffreyVPerry

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Sentiments well expressed and filled with emotion.
thoroughly enjoyed reading.
Repentance is the most important of our journey and you emphasize it throughout this piece.
Have a great season and keep on writing
Comment Written by emrpoems on 07-Dec-2015
In the dark recesses... by royowen

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Once in the light one can't look back,
dark bridges fell, I've walked that track;
to Canaan land I struggle on,
that river cross, love's garment don.

Loved these last lines
good account of a christians thoughts.
Stay steadfast in your quest for everlasting life
Comment Written by emrpoems on 07-Dec-2015
Sleepyheads by BeasPeas
Chapter 5 of the book My Cache of "Picture This" Poems

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lovely poem for this time of the year
Reminds me of the good old days when I believed in Santa.
Great presentation
Good use of abab rhyming scheme
Comment Written by emrpoems on 07-Dec-2015
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