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Blood Moon by ravenblack

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The reality behind the poem is sad but the poem is brilliant. Your moon analogy and metaphors are wonderful. The subtle and irregular rhyme is so apt for the hard-hitting truth you are telling. And 'a soul cough/ awash/ with blood' is indeed a scary and excellent ending. A great write.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 17-Apr-2014
What the Ducks Can Teach Us by adewpearl

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Short, simple yet profound and skilfully eloquent into the bargain. Always a pleasure and an inspiration to read your poetry, Brooke.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 17-Apr-2014
Seasonal Lyrics by Starlit Ink

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Wow. This is excellent on the theme of What Poetry Means To Me. The title is great and the rhyming format and musical metaphors are inspired. Absolutely outstanding.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 17-Apr-2014
Run in the Rain by Andrewajgblue

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Alas, I can no longer run due to worn out knees but I embrace your sentiment and love walking and swimming for much the same reason. My son runs often and participates in 10k races and fun-runs and loves it. Good poem.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 12-Apr-2014
Image by Bill Schott

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Oh, I like this idea and the way you have expressed it. A thought worth keeping in mind each time we look in a mirror. Really well done.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 12-Apr-2014
Forgotten Rose by Eternal Muse
Chapter 8 of the book The Sonnet Collection

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Wow! A pantoum sonnet, that's a challenge, and you've done it very well. Obviously better than the others if it won the contest. Good adherence to theme. Well done.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 12-Apr-2014
My Candy Girl by l.raven

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This is a cute but cautionary tale told in rhyming verse. Quite well written with an interesting and surprise ending. Well done.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 12-Apr-2014
Rock Bottom by Day Z Chayn
Chapter 113 of the book streetbeat/mindmeat

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This is an excellent example of concrete poetry with the bottle shaping the words or the words shaping the bottle. Sadly, the whole story is inside the bottle! A very effective image. Well done.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 12-Apr-2014
You have a friend by adewpearl

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This is absolutely gorgeous and top quality writing as always. Sawyer is such a perfect photographic subject and also a source of inspiration for you, no doubt.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 12-Apr-2014
In the Glow of the Midnight Moon by adewpearl

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This is another superb poem from you Brooke. I love the way you've made the third line in each stanza the action line. The rest is sumptuous simile and metaphor. It is very calming, enlightening and nurturing. I love it.
Comment Written by FrannyG on 05-Apr-2014
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