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His name was Joe. by Mastery

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Hello Bob, great to see you here and writing and what an awesome write this one is! Felt like I was standing next to you the entire time...feeling, seeing and hearing all that was!

Thanks for sharing this wonderful short story and take care, hope to see and read much more from you in the very near future!

All the best to you my friend!

Jeff
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 19-Feb-2014

Apology by Mastery

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Prayers being sent-up for you Bob...may your recovery be both speedy and 100% complete!

Take good care my friend and oh yes, I can relate to the "joy" of the "catheter and bag" schtick...not a good time, that's for certain! ;)

Jeff
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 05-Feb-2014

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN, PART TWO by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 79 of the book Savannah Love

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An excellent chapter write (part II) this is...light-hearted and drama/suspense free, the simple "day-to-day" interaction was penned perfectly in my opinion!

Thanks for sharing, the novel just continues to flow along wonderfully and leads the reader's interest on!

Jeffrey
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 22-Jan-2014

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN, PART ONE by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 78 of the book Savannah Love

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Wonderful chapter write here Barbara...I absolutely loved the interaction between your characters in this one!

Thanks for sharing, and now onto the newest installment I go!

Jeffrey
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 22-Jan-2014

Desperation by Mastery
Chapter 30 of the book Fatal Beauty

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Whoa, didn't see this coming at all Bob and wow...written so excellently, in every regard! There's every element of a winner here in my opinion...haven't read a novel in ages but I'm sure glad that I read this one!

So this seals the deal, whether there's more or not to the book I don't know but I want four of them please regardless (one for me and the rest will will make great gifts)...autographed if possible! :)

Jeff



Comment Written by JMUwrites on 22-Jan-2014

Execution by Mastery
Chapter 29 of the book Fatal Beauty

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Oh my, and so the plot thickens and takes an unexpected turn...great writing Bob, so much so that I'm off now to read the next chapter!

Jeff
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 22-Jan-2014

Witness to Hell by Mastery
Chapter 28 of the book Fatal Beauty

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This is excellent, absolutely love it and they just keep getting better and better! Awesome job with it Bob!

Onto the next!

Jeff
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 22-Jan-2014

The Uninvited Guest by Mastery
Chapter 27 of the book Fatal Beauty

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This is awesome Bob, as were the previous chapter reads! I'm obviously WAY behind, so I'm going to continue on now in hopes of catching back up!

Jeff
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 22-Jan-2014

My Maggie by barrieblakeway

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Wonderful work here baz...love how you intertwine the historical with poetic verse!

Thanks for sharing, hope all is well down-under...cuz it's colder than ice up-above! (-14F with the wind-chill factored in as I write this) ;)

Jeff
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 21-Jan-2014

I Can Seek A Life by tbacha58

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So very beautiful is this poem of recollection; and while the tragedies are obvious and unfortunately plenty, the underlying promise of personal reconciliation and hope for a better tomorrow shine on through like the bright, new morning sun!

As always, thank you for sharing YOU because as always...doing so makes your poetry a wonderful thing to read!

Jeffrey
Comment Written by JMUwrites on 10-Jan-2014


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