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Sweet Surrender by NicciFaye

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The search for truth = trust
The search for self = God
The search for meaning = Life

I am glad that your search is over.
The surrendering of "will" to the greater will is the hardest part.

I shall never leave nor forsake thee. NEVER..

Bless you Nicci
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 27-Apr-2014

Woodland Wonders by Crunchie

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I really like the rhythm and flow of this poem.
The imagery is beautiful and soft.
Purple Haze...
Kiss the Sky.
Spring is HERE..

XOXOXO
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 27-Apr-2014

The Catepillar Grows Wings by Crunchie

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Butterflies are free to fly
Fly away
High away
My my my..Butterfly

I love your deep understanding of the process of metamorphism.
Your "author notes" go perfectly with the writing.
It is an evolutionary process too..

Thanks Crunchie..

XOXOXO
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 12-Apr-2014

Robin by Crunchie

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Well, if Robin doesn't sing to you, I will....LOL
No really, I will...
I love the simplicity and the repetitive phrasing.
Did you do the drawing also?
Great works..

XOXOXO
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 12-Apr-2014

Childhood Memories. by Shirley E Kennedy
Chapter 16 of the book Walk With Me.

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I enjoy this write.
The sentiments and memories are clearly stated.
I often have dreams of my childhood home and the streets I grew up playing on.
Thanks for sharing your gifts..
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 12-Apr-2014

It Came in Threes by GracieAnn

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This is an incredible write....!!!!!
The imagery and message is astounding.
I love the metaphors you have used to describe the "crucifix".
YES..
He gave His life for Us..
Thanks Gracie.
Awesome Poem...

In Christ +++
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 12-Apr-2014

Kerplop by evrenios

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Looks like one of my favorite breakfasts...Yummy
I love the rhythm and rhyme here in this poem.
The flow and cadence works perfectly.
Plus I enjoyed the humor too.
Thanks for sharing..
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 12-Apr-2014

What Poetry Means To Me by STEPHEN A CARTER

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Poetry has been the perfect release for me too.
I have only been writing for about a year now and find that "words" have become to mean so much more. Each word is contemplated before it is used in a line or sentence.
There is so much freedom of expression in poetry.
Thanks for your love of this gift/art...
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 12-Apr-2014

waters by luna_catkins

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Wash me clean.
Drown me in the blue healing waters.
Baptise me in the name of Love.
No blame, no shame, just Life...
Eye 2 Eye
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 12-Apr-2014

haiku (golden orb's) by Lovinia

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There's those bubbles again..LOL
And now they're Golden..
Even better.
I love the imagery and sentiment.
Keep blowing...
Comment Written by MoIronE13 on 12-Apr-2014


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