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Hate Has Given Birth by nomi338

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You are the second person who wrote on the current affairs in America and saying what is going on without hate is worth five stars. Congrats! And the content and rhyme was very good.
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016

Hate by Chris Walker

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I like this, but I thought it could have been more of a character than the threats of what it does. I liked this and hope you do more and hoped you win the contest, I am not in this one. :)
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Assignation by songlines

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I could be wrong but this poem sounds like a person who commits suicide at the place where they met their lover? Good poem dark and deep. ****stars. Keep writing.
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016

Hoover by Gone but not forgotten

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It was fun to see a woman express herself sexually. I liked the story and noticed there was a lot of dialog so it did not seem so racy. Very nice story-you really did express the sexual side of yourself well.
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016

Love Is Short. Have An Affair by ExperiencingLiphe

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Sounds like it is over but not quite over for the character of your poem. Are we stuck too the fact that we have only ONE person in life we must love forever? This is religious bull. And I see a lot of women, and men fall victim to it. ****stars Good poem.
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016

Start With a Light Heart by donnadiann

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Good poem. Really reflected the topic. Had a nice flow and was very direct. It is hard to write a long review on such a short piece. But it was very good and good reading. ****stars, Congrats!
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016

Going Home by Eric1
Chapter 9 of the book WW1

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Very good poem. It made you think all great it would be if all the wars ended at 11:0 o'clock. When we value life more than greed and death. Good poem. ****stars Congrats!
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016

Inhumanity by LisaD123

Exceptional
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That is inhumanity alright. You captured it well in a few lines. It is sad but true. But I thought the way you expressed it in so few words was well felt. ******stars Congrats!
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016

Gus by prettybluebirds

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I'm a sucker for hero-dogs. This was a nicely written story. It was predictable but you did leave the element of surprise in it with the rattlesnake. Was this a true story? ******stars. Congrats!
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Empathy with Emily by edieas

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Seems like you are saying you may have many different characters in your head as a way of expressing your crazy thoughts in poem. Good write *****stars.
Comment Written by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016


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