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One Kiss in Time. by Mary Ann McPhedran

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You've written a marvellous, I'd guess a biographical poem, with the very well placed repeating line that re enforces your well written work Mary Ann, A most impressive repetitive poem with very good rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 27-Jan-2020

Freedom on Alcatraz by lyenochka

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We were in San Francisca in 2010, in January and the weather was mild and sunny, we stayed near Fisherman's Wharf, we did everything except go to Alcatraz. But I'm glad you told and shared with us dear Helen. You've met another challenge brilliantly, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written by royowen on 27-Jan-2020

Sounds of Sleet and Sun by lyenochka

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Excellent alliteration Helen, you've done a splendid job with this, you are a very gifted writer, you've revealed the real value of being on this site, you're very good, and you've met this challenge wonderfully, alliteration is a dynamic part of poetry, and you've done so well, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 27-Jan-2020

Listen to the Music by Gloria ....

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Because Heaven is so full of music, it makes sense that sounds of nature are in harmony with that which is normal. Of course you seem to do these challenges so easily. I think this a perfect interpretive example of your ability Gloria, so well done blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 27-Jan-2020

The Lyrebird by Dolly'sPoems

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The passerine sounds like a genuine version of a mocking, I'm Australian and haven't even heard of it, but I'm glad that I have that you told me of this amazing bird. Another beautifully written sonnet Dolly, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 27-Jan-2020

The Heart of Writing by judiverse

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Yes, I agree, what makes writer? A desire to write, and write the human things that move them the most, I hardly picked up a pen, until I met the God of the universe, although I did like other things, and occasionally write about them. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 26-Jan-2020

They All Fall Down by Mistydawn
Chapter 17 of the book Nowhere to Hide

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So they've captured Romero, and both Jerry and Rachel were Hurt by an explosion, but relatively unharmed, but Elizabeth will be happy that this threat is at least out of the way. An excellent episode and series my friend, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Lay here and (Morn) yourself to death Joe. Mourn?
Comment Written by royowen on 26-Jan-2020

I Look to the One by Teri7

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When the Lord revealed Himself to me, I was certainly ready to embrace Him and all He had to offer, when I understood that service was His mantra, I have resolved to be what He said I should be. Well done, amen to all you've said Teri, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 26-Jan-2020

The Piper, part 32 by w.j.debi

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It looks like Captain Burkehart may have found the entrance to the lands beyond these ones, where the "fair folk" may be living, and he must be looking for Piper. It seems he's as clever as the Fae. I love your style Debi, I've always been interested in the more escapist genres, why? Because I didn't like the world I lived in. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 26-Jan-2020

It was always you by justafan

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Such an emotive few words. The ekphrastic affect is most dramatic, from being childhood playmates to being lifetime lovers is so touching, and two graves side by side, reveals eternal lovers, well done, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 26-Jan-2020


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