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The Psychologist by Bichon
Chapter 1 of the book Ivy on the Cliffs

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It's good to see you launching out Chloe, are still studying online? My three grandsons in Queensland are being home schooled, and they've shut themselves off from the world, but of course we can FaceTime them.i like this in the first person, I was wondering if she should, was seeing a Psychiatrist or Psychologist?psychiatrists are trained as medical doctors first, then specialise. Well done, good job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

The Good by Iza Deleanu
Chapter 14 of the book The Corona saga

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I don't think the heat will kill the virus, the human body is pretty warm, Yeh, yes, things like Skype, or FaceTime keeps in touch with FaceTime, well done, stopping thinking too much, your mind will convince you of things that haven't happened. Have faith not fear, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

The Aqua-Beings Want Answers by sandramitchell
Chapter 7 of the book Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4

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This is a very clever episode, true or not, I know that the human part of Jesus knew His ancestors, and they were meant to be His human ancestors, and a fine eclectic mix they were indeed, as our could be, it makes sense to me that when we get to Heaven we will know all our ancestors, but then we'll know Abraham and co. An excellent plot with this episode, plenty of good sense for your grandson, well done dear Sandra, blessings. Roy has
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

Hope For The Best by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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So far our government has been most diligent with state borders shut, all pubs, clubs, and really only essential services operating, not that there is anything to fear, Stop listening to your thoughts.
I've written a few poems incorporating Psalm 91 in it, you need to chant Psalm 91: 3. There's no need to fear, fear is the opposite of faith dear girl. You know that. Your not in NY. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

Web of Deception by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 28 of the book Horror Haiku

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This is particularly good, because of the ambiguity of the narrative, with a little crypticness thrown in. The artwork really sets the scene for the fabulous narrative, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

Fairies In the Garden by N.K. Wagner

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What a very charming, lighthearted gem that gladdens the heart in these doom laden days we're experiencing. Of course these clever little people bounding round our gardens are welcome but shy, and want us to go away. This is beautifully written Nancy in connecting, articulate and smooth, rhyming verses, and abcb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy,
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

C is for crosstitch by Badger_29

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When I was working, I always seemed to time on my hands, now that I'm retired, I don't have any, heh heh, an excellent acrostic Darren, you are doing lots of posting lately, well done, an excellent acrostic, about an acrostic, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

End of Life's Journey, Part 11 by Spitfire

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Things have not worked out for poor Ruth, first, she changes her mind about the apartment, then finds that the new tenant won't give it up, then she prangs her car, then gets very sick, she has a fall, and paramedics can't get past her body, just an average day in one's life. Well done, my friend. A tale of bad luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

Out of Groceries by Gypsy Blue Rose

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I Remember being on holiday in Malaysia, from Arabia, in the same hotel as us, and seeing them with brand name jeans and sneakers under their Burqua, and taking rides on parachutes towed by fast boats, with a full burqua on, heh, you are right about the hypocrisy. Beautifully written Gypsy, excellent job, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

Why... by MARIANNE GIANNO

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A beautifully told story, in fine poetic staccato stanzas, short on meter, but long quantity, a very sad poignant journey, in which he'd had here but lost her, then lost her again. I think you have to connect the last word of each verse, with the next verse of the proceeding stanza, but a great entry, articulate and smooth. With abcb rhyming, Well done good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 29-Mar-2020


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