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The grime reaper by Iza Deleanu
Chapter 100 of the book The Corona saga

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I never knew that, they were called a "contact tracery but then, that makes sense, and as they say, "someone has to do it" a beautifully written article Iza, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : The (grime) reaper. Grim? 2: the heart works wonder(s)
3: I witness miraculous healing(s)
Comment Written by royowen on 15-Apr-2021

Vibrissa / Vibrissae by lyenochka
Chapter 14 of the book Word for That: Technical Words

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How fascinating Helen, I can remember that was a no no, where children were concerned, stopping them from cutting off cat's whispers, they used them to find their way through narrow passages, well done Helen, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 15-Apr-2021

Anticipating Summer by Dolly'sPoems

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Yes it always seems that winter doesn't want to loose its icy grip, and let spring have its way, but the seasons will still have their way, and the warmth will gain the upper hand. Well done Dolly, you've done a great job, beautifully written sonnet, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 15-Apr-2021

Lavender Somersaults by Gloria ....

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What a marvellous haiku, how interesting that is vertical turning, of course the only one I've ever known is the horizontally spinning, world OK thought, well done
Gloria, good post, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 15-Apr-2021

The proposal by Sergeant Floyd

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God may be there to help us through, but mainly in difficult situations, amd like the good parent He is, we must negotiate the rest ourselves. This is a good example of great poetry writing and articulation, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 14-Apr-2021

Chapter thirty-six by dmt1967
Chapter 36 of the book DIFFERENCES (final draft)

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A world full of wizards and vampires, werewolves and 'Pires, all with the capacity to defeat mankind and take over and have one less obstacle to overcome, well, one, anyhow. I like the flying, and transforming, and translating, as it should be, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : I have b(r)ought it. 2: what we(')re told. 3: and they knew it(.)
Comment Written by royowen on 14-Apr-2021

~ I'm No Monster ~ by Jannypan (Jan)

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How fascinating, of course I've heard of the expression "Chemira" but never associated as that it was what intended as two embryos is actually one animal, with two separate characteristics. Beautifully written Kyrielle, well done Jan, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 14-Apr-2021

A Man's Justice? by lancellot

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One has to feel for a man whose life was affectively ruined by, what I would consider, an unjust decision. Family courts, like fostered children have sentenced, particularly men to unjust judgements, unequal custody battles, the children are quite often the victims of these judgements. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 14-Apr-2021

Only God's Peace Will Do by Teri7

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Thank you for reaching out to those that have never tasted what the grace of God can, everlasting peace, salvation, and a purpose for living, being loved and giving love in return, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written by royowen on 14-Apr-2021

The Far Barn

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This is just a little bit saucy, but the doofus himself would be grateful fo a cousin that was decidedly a little "loose". I never had any cousins like this. Well done, certainly a surprise, good luck. Blessings Roy.
Suggestion. "Now drop your trousers..."
Comment Written by royowen on 14-Apr-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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