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Request for help, Part 2 by krprice
Chapter 20 of the book Killer Candy

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Mel Silverscales makes a deman that they let Bright Star, Rainbow Dreams, Silver Moon and others go free. They land on Alosia a couple of days later. Skerry and Lieu seek out a second hand store. Lieu and Skerry have obtained a house, and going about fixing it to dwell in. Vik gets a from Lady Natalia for help, off to Kollic Vik Goes, well done, blessings, Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 25-Sep-2020

Flame Skimmer Dragonfly by Dolly'sPoems

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Yes indeed, mosquitoes are not very good around and for human beings, they can be the cause of some nasty diseases, my poor daughter contracted something akin to malaria, and spent sometime in hospital never found out what it is. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 25-Sep-2020

Spring Arrived by Sandra du Plessis

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We're having a real cold snap at the moment, with weather coming off the Antarctica, so some places even had some snow, beautifully written Sandra, beautifully written, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 25-Sep-2020

Let Wisdom Guides You by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 90 of the book Wisdom & Truths to start the day

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God's wisdom is different to ours, earthly wisdom is based on belief we can achieve something by past results, but Heavenly wisdom is based on godly solutions, which pass human understanding, well done Sandra, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 25-Sep-2020

Mountain Sheep by seaglass

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They look most brave and have a great build and a sure footedness to beat those treacherous mountain slopes. Beautifully written in immaculate couplets and a great rhyming sense, well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 24-Sep-2020

Come On, Get Happy!

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Yes, indeed, sometimes the site doesn't necessarily help with formatting. Beautifully written with nice rhyme, a very satisfying theme to the narrative, and beautifully written. I like the very upbeat nature ofvtge poem, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 24-Sep-2020
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Overcomer by Shirley McLain

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I totally agree that faith overcomes fear, the certainty of God's promise is beset on the fact that God, I think that confession definitely helps with the certainty, like the twelve inches between head and heart, beautifully written Shirley, well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 24-Sep-2020

Rainy Thursday Morning by lyenochka

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You've written a poem, that I don't think I could in 15 minutes, but this sounds a little like some troubles that's surrounding but I wasn't aware of, I join with you in prayer, I didn't know Hubby was suffering, well done Helen, comprehensive work, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 24-Sep-2020

The Tuning Fork by lightink

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I had to look up who RBG was/is, you should put a note as to who she was, I didn't know who RBG was. A truly great woman, an emancipative hero. Thank you, Beautifully written, honouring her. Well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 24-Sep-2020

Drown your Sorrows by Dolly'sPoems

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I think we would like to be cavalier about life, but the truth is when I've been confronted by issues, at least in the short term, it's beaten me down, it's only optimism that pulled me out, well done, great post. Blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 24-Sep-2020