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The truest and purser love of all gave Himself and His life, that we might live and be His kin, death could not hold Him, and rose again to eat the fruit of His work on the cross, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

That Time Of The Year by Katherine M. (k-11)

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I'm not sure what the object that is being dropped is Kay, so I'm really at a loss, but thanks for the poets, those more adept than I will know. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023

What!!! by damommy

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I can remember staying in a caravan park where there was gaggle of geese, four strong, who would strong- arm us into giving them food. They were terrorists, we called them "The Gang of Four" this is hilarious Yvonne, a great write, well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023

Tracking Geronimo by Ben Colder

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Talk about a conundrum, do we turn back knowing that lack of water will surely kill us, or do we carry on, running the risk of dying in a principle, that is the question, well done Ben, great post, good luck, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023

The Draw Love Assignment

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I'm not sure what nature's love is, nature is bound by order, that's coexistence I suppose, which is why t could be about love. Great job my friend, an excellent post, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Note by PoemsOfDD

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Talk about regrets, one's anger can be a terrible thing, or unforgiveness. If the object of our resentment is dying, there is no way back from the ravine created by death, this is beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023

Teenage Hormones by Debbie D'Arcy

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Without knowing the circumstances, I can't comment, but being the fortunate father of two daughters which I adore, I can understand where you're coming from. This is superbly written by someone who knows their way around a poem, well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023

For Indy by humpwhistle

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A great tribute Lee, although we crossed paths sinrtomes, I never got to know her, I've been onsite since 2012' but never had a "convo". But so many have vanished from fanstory. But a great tribute Lee, well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023

The Ghosts of Jenkins House by Father Flaps

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How exciting dear friend, I must admit I've never seen a ghost, or rather an apparition, but my beliefs don't embrace the idea either, so I don't believe or disbelieve. But I do like the stories and this great poem, skilfully scribed and full of your undoubted poetic abilities, well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023

~ Our New Plan ~ by Jannypan (Jan)

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This is an excellent swap quatrain, you are rather good at these dear Jan. the swap is perfect, and of course I particularly like the theme, they are such clever birds, well done, blessings Roy

Comment Written by royowen on 28-Mar-2023