Blue-hued
A free verse poem in attempt to understand Alzheimer disease
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In Vase of Blue by Mrs. KT

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Simply beautiful. I love the word essence and all it implies. I lost my beloved Mother in law a couple years ago.She would always greet me in a flurry, hihihi, she would say. When I walk into her home now, I whisper hihihi, just in case.
This is a powerful poem that gives us a glimpse of a Mother well~loved and missed. Cheers, judester
Comment Written by judester on 16-Feb-2020

Aging Advances - Life Pages Turn by rama devi

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Bravo, a five line reminder to appreciate each day we have. I am heading to the fla keys on Monday. My wanderlust keeps me young and happy. Wishing you a wonderful Sunday, cheers.
Comment Written by judester on 16-Feb-2020

Dark Clouds

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Great poem and I can almost smell the air. i love that vacumn feeling in the air as storms approach. I would only change the 'an' to another word. like chill or fierce. Good luck in the contest, cheers.
Comment Written by judester on 16-Feb-2020
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Dna by the13thpoet

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Good on the win 13. I had fun with this one. I think we have all had that urge to express ourselves through words of the good and the bad influences in our lives. Bravo, well done. j
Comment Written by judester on 15-Feb-2020

The Beginning by BethShelby
Chapter 1 of the book Remembering Yesterday

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I am already looking forward to the following chapters. You give us a delightful glimpse of a young girl in a small town and all the influences that determine her choices. I already know that her life turns out well, but how she got there is the beauty of the tale. cheers, judester
Comment Written by judester on 13-Feb-2020

At 9:15 by Natalie Goodwin

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A complete story in so few words. A good reminder to always leave in peace with loved ones. Tomorrow is not promised. I am sure stories like this play out al over the world, every day. Good luck in the contest, see you at the finish line, haha.
Comment Written by judester on 12-Feb-2020

Don't Worry by HarryT

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Good one for the contest. A little glimpse into one couple's scary night, haha. I believe whimper has an H. Good luck, see you at the finish line, cheers.
Comment Written by judester on 11-Feb-2020
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They Grow, Damn It! by Louise Michelle

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Haha, I sympathize. A clever little poem giving us a glimpse into one woman's constant trial with beauty routines. I am nowhere near as particular. I cut my hair when it gets too long, file my nails when I happen to find a file and in the winter, I give up totally on shaving my legs until spring. You do look beautiful in your pic, so it is not wasted efforts. haha
Cheers, judester
Comment Written by judester on 11-Feb-2020

Imagination by Pam (respa)

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A wonderful poem reminding us of the freedom of imagination.
Plus a song. I am travelling to the Florida Keys next week, and look forward to those ocean breezes, cheers.
Comment Written by judester on 09-Feb-2020

Burdening Questions by Gert sherwood

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A testimony to the power of faith. There is just something soothing knowing there is a place to put our troubles down, that is always there. Good luck with the contest and have a peaceful Sunday, cheers.
Comment Written by judester on 09-Feb-2020


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