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The dress is amazing and the girl,"Dulce," is as good looking as you and Carlos agreed on.

If you want to know about putting several photos on your post contact Dean Kuch. He is amazing at that

Comment Written by Muffins on 20-May-2017

Time For Another Ramble Is NOW by Sasha

Excellent

I enjoy your ramble because they don't read as rumbles. I hear the fun and laughter I this ramble. Your friend Carlos sounds like someone that is a solid friend and will always have your back.

The tibits about the old men chasing teenagers is hilarious and gross. But I guess if the man has money he wouldn't be lonely for companionship.

Comment Written by Muffins on 20-May-2017

Quiz #2 by Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Sometimes the best post are the funny off beat ones. This one fits that bill. As one of the best writers on Fanstory, I see your life, at least your writing life, as exciting. It's an honorable talent and one many people bleed on their keyboard to obtain!

Comment Written by Muffins on 18-Mar-2017

My Life Is A Time Capsule Pt. 1 by Sasha

Excellent

I barely remember Encyclopedia , but I do remember researching in the library using micro-film. I always wondered why movies made in the fifties had such strange telephone numbers. Your going back in time enlightens me on that fact. And your right when, you think about it, you have live through the most turbulent times in American history: Jim crow, civil rights, women rights, and the guy community demanding rights. I think each life is a history lesson. Can't wait for part 2.

Comment Written by Muffins on 18-Mar-2017

The Confession by Mastery
Chapter 42 of the book Falling Up The Stairs

Excellent

Joey's life has been cursed with foolish adults. I hope this time he refuses to go to a foster home and sets out on his own.

The weakness of Joe and especially Connie is shown in crystal clear detail through the dialogue and Joey's observation. He needs to start living on his own and start with going back home to his sister and grandparents.

Comment Written by Muffins on 16-Mar-2017

A Simple Batch of Vegetable Soup by Sasha

Excellent

This short delightful piece reminded me of my grandmother. She lived with her sister and their house was the house to go to on the holidays. And my grandmother being from the South cooked big. When everyone was young with kids we went to their house to eat. Many years later, after my aunt went to live in a home, and the grand kids were grown she continue to cook big until she passed away. I think your mother passed down a wonderful gift of cooking big. Cooking big means to get to share the food with the people most important to you. Don't stop.

Comment Written by Muffins on 15-Mar-2017

The Reconciliation by Mastery
Chapter 41 of the book Falling Up The Stairs

Excellent

I'm glad Joey had a couple who cared about him. Their lack of urgency on Joey's bump I can filed in the ignorance file. There wasn't any hate involved.

Joey going back to his father and step mother I hope will last. This boy needs a stable home.

Comment Written by Muffins on 15-Mar-2017

The Geraldo Rivera Show Pt. 1 by Sasha

Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

Wow, you have my mouth watering for more. How exciting. Your writing vibrates with the thrill you were feeling and experiencing. You said you didn't watch Mr. Rivera's show, but once you had a week of free time did you bother to watch it?

Can't wait for part two.

Comment Written by Muffins on 28-Feb-2017

Saving My Sanity, Part Four by Spitfire

Excellent

You have a lot of people helping you. One doesn't know how much of a support system they have until they need it.

I'm glad your Neighbor Lynn was there when you where dealing with David. I think he saw an opportunity to rip you off, but not by much.

I hope the moving happens smoothly because we all know what a pain in the butt it can be.

Comment Written by Muffins on 28-Feb-2017

A Life of Crime by doggymad

Excellent

Laughable true to life enjoyable tale. It's frame worked cleverly leading readers to expect humans instead of cat as the smart theives. As we all know cats are smart as or smarter than humans.

Comment Written by Muffins on 22-Feb-2017