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This Masque of Death by Dean Kuch

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Nice entry for this contest, I like the message, and the picture is worth a thousand words. I agree, we all do smile in the end, Lol. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 15-Nov-2016
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She brings hope's dream.. by royowen

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Your granddaughter is stunning! She look so happy and innocent as are all children her age, and it is a blessing to have grandchildren, and watch them grow. Your poem is well written with a smooth rhyme, good job.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 19-Oct-2016

I Miss the Girl by Irish Rain

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This is a nicely written Rondeau poem with a nice theme. Very well constructed with an even rhyme scheme, this should do well in the contest. Good job, good luck.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 19-Oct-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

north winds gentle kiss by Neonewman

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This poem made me smile, the words are absolutely relaxing and visionary. The winds blowing the leaves off the trees and exposing the bare branches is a nice theme for this Artful Haiku. Good job with the syllable count, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 19-Sep-2016

An endless wave... by royowen

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Your poem is very well written about the realization of God's wisdom and making Him the leader is one's life. If we choose to serve God, life is much easier. The poem is well written with a nice flow and smooth rhyme. I really enjoy reading your spiritual insight, good job with this write.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 19-Sep-2016

farmer's fresh fast food by Sis Cat

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Fresh vegetables and fruit are so appetizing! I don't personally develop heartburn from them or fast food which I try to avoid. Your syllable count is spot on for this writing prompt, I like your author's notes about the idea for this poem. Good job with the theme, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 19-Sep-2016

Haiku (sunflowers grace) by giraffmang

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I really like your artful Haiku it's imaginative and very well stated. The words without an art display are strong and gives a good mental picture of your theme. Good job, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 12-Sep-2016

They by livelylinda

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Your declaration of your sexual orientation is funny. It's a shame that we have to explain everything to the people on this site, but I understand your point, because people will assume that you identify with trans. I like the theme of your poem, that's got to be tormenting as well as confusing to someone going through this tough situation. The flow is nice, thanks for giving us a glimpse into the mind of someone experiencing this confusion.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 10-Sep-2016

We Are Thankful by crybry67
Chapter 1 of the book The Truth of the Matter

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Your poem depicts strong faith in God, giving thanks for all that he has done for you. I especially like "to keep my eyes on You, and let You lead the way." The poem is nicely written with a smooth flow and rhyming. Good job, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 10-Sep-2016

Dementia. by WintyBoy

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I like the theme of your 7-7-7 poem. It's tough getting old, and I think that we all experience forgetfulness in our older age. I like the humor in your poem, It's ashame that we have to add author's note to explain our point on Fanstory, but it's necessary for all the sensitive people on this site. Good job, best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written by sage17611 on 05-Sep-2016
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