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Endless love by Jackarrie
Chapter 11 of the book Poetry

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Nicely done. That bond that does not break or bend and holds fast with us until the end of day or trauma right or wrong that let's us know that we belong. Your Ma!
Comment Written by Finglas on 28-Sep-2015

Rustic Landscape by Pam (respa)

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I love the leaves blowing in the breeze feel of this poem. There's a frost on the pumpkin echo here that makes us all gracefully now to summer and embrace Autumn. Very well done.
Comment Written by Finglas on 16-Sep-2015

Luna of the night by Jackarrie
Chapter 18 of the book Poetry

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My suggestion - keep em coming. I love the freedom you display in this poem. It's raw, real, no holds barred poetry -- a peep into the real Mary. Well done. I love this piece.
Comment Written by Finglas on 08-Sep-2015

Music Touches the Soul by Pam (respa)

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Bravo. This is a great piece. One of my favorite poems begins with "We are the music makers and we are the dreamers of dreams". We are defined by our music, it tells the real story of who we are. Children respond to music, pure raw emotions that are the tapestry (one of the great albums of all time) of our lives. One of the things that brought me to America was the music, the viseral pulse of a nation beating for all to hear.
Comment Written by Finglas on 08-Sep-2015

Poetry in Motion by Pam (respa)

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Another evocative piece. Very well done. The entire package works Rey well together. Your words create a flight of fancy and isn't that one of the main reasons we put pen to paper to begin with.
Comment Written by Finglas on 01-Sep-2015

A Bad Feather Day by Pam (respa)

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I like the stark, raw feel you bring to this piece in a real economy of words. You can feel the dampness and uncomfortableness of the birds well done. Excellent pictures.
Comment Written by Finglas on 17-Aug-2015

Sun worshipers. by Jackarrie

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Very nicely done. Excellent take on the subject matter. Sun worship takes all forms but this is truly unique. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Finglas on 17-Aug-2015

Tableau, A vista of nature. by Jackarrie

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Iike this piece a lot but particularly the open stanza. The imagery and rhyme capture the mystery of the beauty of the world that is all around us.
Comment Written by Finglas on 08-Aug-2015

The Phoenix by Jackarrie

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Very well done on this one. You capture downward spur dling of emotions when people feel deserted, even by themselves, very well. And your conclusion is right on, the answer is within all of us.
Comment Written by Finglas on 08-Aug-2015

Great Blue Heron Courtship Cycle by Pam (respa)

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This piece is a visual poetic moveable feast -- one if my favorite Hemingway books. You capture the magesty of the blue heron very well in this piece. Well done.
Comment Written by Finglas on 27-Jul-2015


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