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He never came... by royowen

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Great work Roy and a reminder that Jesus wanted to lead us back to Heaven. It is sad that many only call on him when they need something, and then try to bargain with Him.

Surely the way forward is to place our trust in the person who gave up everything for us.

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Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 07-Apr-2018

We Are the Daughters by Gloria ....

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I loved this poem which depicts the strong bond between mother and daughter.

We are all products of our childhood influences and clearly us women will always remember the lessons we learned from our mothers who fought through thick and thin to give us the best life possible.

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Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 07-Apr-2018

Sarah and her Story by Michael Steinert
Chapter 2 of the book For Sarah

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A short work which has a strong impact on the reader. It tells a story of how an abused woman can succumb to drunk to achieve oblivion and how the unsolved past can haunt her.

Best of luck in the contest

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Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 07-Apr-2018

My Hero! by Commando

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Wonderful work my friend. I am sure Sheryl will treasure this work.

Heroes are most definitely those who have the courage to fight for what they believe and not many realise the suffering that brings when the actual conflict has ended.

Best of luck in the contest

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Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 07-Apr-2018

The Same Conversation Every Morning by Sasha

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Oh Sasha I think I would end up eating at home. As always an amusing look at life in your part of the world. Actually we live in very similar places, apart from the weather.

We have the highest concentration of strange people in the whole of Ireland, or at least it feels that way.

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Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 07-Apr-2018

Reminiscing by damommy

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I loved this work as it took me back to simpler times. We played on the streets with no fear, rarely watched television and were very happy.

As always I make no comment on the format but it works well for this telling.

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Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 07-Apr-2018

Please Pray by l.raven

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I just heard this on television. My thought and prayers are with their families at this sad time. It is becoming a nightmare for everybody not knowing if their child is going to be killed in a school, a traffic accident or some other tragedy.

love and hugs

Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 07-Apr-2018

Kitchen Disaster by judiverse

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This was so funny. I can just feel the panic as chef announces that he has a 'bombe' ready for the restaurant.

Perfect flash fiction with so few words. I wish you all the best in the contest.

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Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 04-Apr-2018

Teachers by rhonnie69
Chapter 2 of the book FAMILY TIES.

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An excellent work encouraging all to embrace education both student and tutor. We rarely appreciate the effort that these people put in to benefit us all.

One small suggestion would be to reduce the use of capitals, it is not necessary to prove that you have produced an acrostic work.

Blessings

Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 04-Apr-2018

Recovery by Michael Steinert

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If only I had your skill with words, I could have written this. I write better after a beer of two, but the doctors wouldn't appreciate my treatment of my organs.

Best of luck in the contest with this entry.

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Freda
Comment Written by doggymad on 04-Apr-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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