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For Love, Are You Too Old? by victor 66

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A very beautiful poem (an acrostic, I believe). I particularly liked the line 'Our real wealth is the happiness we give to others'. You remind me that by that standard (and no other) I am a rich man. This would make an excellent poster. I hope you submit it somewhere where it can get a wider audience.
Comment Written by billgrumman on 16-Jan-2015

Balderdash and Gobbledygook by adewpearl

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I believe this poem should be printed on the first page of the 'Congressional Record', from now till the end of time, it ably captures the spirit of government and television News shows. A very funny poem. Good for a laugh and five stars.
I'd write more, but the Jabberwocky is knocking at my front door and he hates to be kept waiting. Please keep writing.
Comment Written by billgrumman on 16-Jan-2015

Dog's Prayer by Genya

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Fantastic. I printed this poem to hang by my bed, the one my Pug thinks is his. You have captured perfectly the spirit of dog's.
Comment Written by billgrumman on 15-Jan-2015

The Smallest Caskets by granny goes viral

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Having lost a child I can say that you title says it all. The Smallest Caskets are the Heaviest. And the loss never fades away. The numbers don't matter, one hurts as much as a hundred when it's personal. I wish I had more stars to give you.
Comment Written by billgrumman on 25-Dec-2014

Applause Please by Wendyanne

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Congratulations! Take it from one who is very happily divorced, those who can survive marriage deserve a Medal of Valor. Maybe your writing will change the way you see each other, an inspire a little fire. I hope you let him read your work. Keep on writing!
Comment Written by billgrumman on 29-Nov-2014

All I have is a photograph by DR DIP

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Anyone who has lost a loved one to depression will understand this poem. Thank you for writing it. Well worth a five rating.
Comment Written by billgrumman on 26-Nov-2014

2000 Bad Acres by billmetz

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I loved your story. If only we could clearly see 30 years down the rode, how different our lives would be. You have me laughing about everything I've thrown out that turned out to valuable years later (Like that Mickey Mantle M.V.P. card and the signed Beatles photos). You made my day. The story is perfect. It sounds like something Paul Harvey would have reported on. I give it a 6.
Comment Written by billgrumman on 23-Nov-2014
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Ice Bucket Challenge by gazzagodbod

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Blimey... it sounds like something an Englishman would do and say. I loved it. Keep on writing poems like these. We could all use a laugh
Comment Written by billgrumman on 28-Aug-2014

Mo' Money, Mo' Problems by High Wire Girl

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Please tell me you don't work as a bank teller... An interesting confession of past crimes. What would you be doing today if you hadn't got caught? By the way, What are you doing today?
Comment Written by billgrumman on 26-Aug-2014
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Cat's Meow by Dean Kuch
Chapter 4 of the book Tiny Terrors

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Nasty... I may try this with my ex-wife's Dachshund. (I hear they make great sausages). I loved the story. It was direct and with a diabolical laugh at the end. Now if you will excuse me, I think my Hamster has wandered off. Maybe permanently.
Comment Written by billgrumman on 15-Aug-2014


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