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Monovision ~ Sight for Eyes by BeasPeas

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My daughter has contact lenses that are as you have described in the poem. It would not work for me as I am basically blind in my right eye.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

My Physical Therapists by Angel Debbie

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I hope the physical therapists were pleased with the poem. It is lovely in its wording and presentation. May tomorrow be a blessing to you.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

A Rather Unexpected Plunge by Mark Schardine

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This poem paint a picture in the mind of the reader about some mischievous boys pulling a prank on an clueless lady going for a swim. Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

Coffee Possible? by BeasPeas

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I do not like coffee, but I kinda feel the same about my morning cup of tea. May you have a blessed day tomorrow.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

Junco's Threats by lyenochka

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There are very territorial birds that will scold us when we walk past where the are nesting. May you evening and tomorrow be blessed.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

Temptation is Surely a Test by LisaMay

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To be tempted to do something wrong is not a sin as long as we do not follow through on the temptation. May you have a blessed day.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

The Better We Are by LisaMay

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It is true that the better we get at the things we do the more we enjoy it. Our efforts are more treasured if we make something as a gift for others.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

Character Counts by Darlene Franklin

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It is an awful thing in life to be judged by the color of our skin, the body in which we live or in the mistakes we make, when it would be far better to be judged by the behavior we exhibit.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

A long way down by JudyE

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There is nothing quite like the arms of a mummy as she helps us in times of stress. I enjoyed this flash fiction and wish you the best in the contest.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019

Living Hell by Bill Pinder

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Not only does physical beating destroy lives, but emotional beating will destroy the life as well. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 26-Jun-2019


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