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Mark My Words by Melissa Russell Deur

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When I was in high school there was a young girl about 15 who came to America from Poland, she did not know a word of English when she arrived, but in three month she was speaking better English that many of we native Americans. She would go home every night and learn over 100 words each night.
Patricia
Good luck in the contest.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 07-Sep-2020

Homeless Shelter? by Teri7

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This is a cute story and to have a four year old say, it would be okay with Jesus to give them to the homeless shelter is charming.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 05-Sep-2020

This Morning. by mrsmajor

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The corona virus and the rising of prices are having an effect on many people. I cannot drive and have not been in s grocery store in the whole time of the virus, but with your writing, I can also see why people are out of sorts.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 05-Sep-2020

Always Remember Mom. by Becky Kern-Taylor

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In this ABC poem entry in the contest you have beautifully extolled the truth of our need to value our mothers. I didn't
have the safest relationship with my mother, but I did value her as my mother.
Good luck in the contest.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 05-Sep-2020

Cicada Songs by BermyBye50

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A few years ago when I lived iin New Mexico,there was the periodic return of the cicadas and the cacophony of there song was maddening when trying to sleep at night because they were in a tree right next to my bedroom.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 05-Sep-2020

Old, but not Cold by Dolly'sPoems

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As we get old if will gracefully accept the evident changes in life as they come our way. We will find that accepting the changes we are holding the key to wisdom.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 05-Sep-2020

Slugs by Dolly'sPoems

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Slugs are disgusting little creatures. We had a lot of then when I lived in California, but I have not seen any of then in this arid climate in the desert.
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Comment Written by patcelaw on 05-Sep-2020

Revelation by Ross E Silke

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This is a great post and expresses a positive message about the soon coming of our Lord and our forever home in Heaven.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 05-Sep-2020

Infected by Chelle_GH

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This is a positive post about the journey with the covid19 and was a pleasure to read. I am glad it was through this that you rediscovered your relationship with God, May God bless you and keep you safe.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 05-Sep-2020

Biden Shelters in Place by judiverse

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This is hilariously funny, Oh, what a shame it would be for him to have to leave the cocooning in his basement. I hope it will not happen at all.
Patricia
Comment Written by patcelaw on 03-Sep-2020


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