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Pawns by Mystic Angel 7777

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Mystic, I love your take on this government using a chess game. I absolutely love playing chess so I got all the jest. Brilliantly crafted my friend.
God bless,
Steve.
Comment Written by Neonewman on 17-Nov-2019

A Chore No More by Jannypan (Jan)

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Jan, This is a cold hard fact about summers end. I do love it when the leaves are red and gold and purple, however we don't get to see that much here in Texas.
God bless.
Steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 17-Nov-2019

Hiding in Plain Sight by ElPoetry001

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Oh, that sounds nice. I wouldn't mind a little getaway, hideaway to disappear for a minute or two lol. Thank you for sharing this awesome little piece.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 10-Nov-2019

Two Turkeys by Jannypan (Jan)

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Hey, I liked the style this one was well-crafted in, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed the rhymes throughout as it added a bit of fun for me. Well done, my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 10-Nov-2019

Passing Thoughts by Dorothy Farrell

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Yes, a great sonnet here, Dorothy. I love your take on the broken heart healed for a sonnet. I enjoyed the difference from head over heals sonnets.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 10-Nov-2019

Time Will Tell by Dorothy Farrell

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Well, this is certainly heart-wrenching, Dorothy. I've been through it on my end and have learned to live with it. It doesn't make like easier, just copeable. thank you for sharing.
God bless
steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 09-Nov-2019

Street Scene by Henry Greenfield

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I enjoyed your take on this sonnet, my friend. The reference of unfurling his fan of eyes, truth in this sentence. Thank you for sharing you talent and best of luck in the polls'
God bless
Steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 09-Nov-2019

no compensation for damages by bertodi

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This is quite a compelling piece you have delivered here, my friend. Extremely well-crafted and certainly provokes one's thoughts. Thank you for sharing.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 09-Nov-2019

Hound Dog Face by EricDaGoose

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A powerful piece you have crafted well, my friend. People can be cruel indeed and it shows in your words. What a daunting sentence this is.
"I find it quite disturbing, that you don't look like me."
God bless
Steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 09-Nov-2019

A Soldier's Story. by brenda bickers

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Wow! This veteran's day poem is beautifully crafted and emotionally stunning, my friend. My heart is swelling as well as my pride for all those who've served.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written by Neonewman on 09-Nov-2019


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