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Form and Function by Debbie Noland

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Terrific piece extolling the difference between the sexes. Well written with a predictable ending yet unexpected. I got more than a chuckle from your accurate story. The best entry I have read for this prompt. Best wishes in the voting. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 02-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Western World Culture by Curly Girly
Chapter 4 of the book Thoughtful Poems and Prose

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Very well done. The journey through cultural development is accurate, simply stated, and a fun read. You have a strong contender for this prompt. Best wishes. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 02-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

What's Wrong with our Boy? by jpduck

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Excellent entry Adrian. Although there were clues along the way, the ending still came as a surprise. You characterize the insidiousness of the dark net wet well and the toll it takes. Chillingly real. Best wishes for the contest. You have a strong contender here. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 29-Apr-2015

Dancing On The Drapes by Jay Squires
Chapter 2 of the book BENT: Wake or Cross

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Intelligent and provocative. I appreciate the creativity and imagination. This story is quickly becoming engrossing. It is good to read something that is so far left of the tired old norm. You hooked me Jay ... I'm in! Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 29-Apr-2015

Macro/Micro Critting by Jay Squires
Chapter 2 of the book How This Critter Crits

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An excellent piece of writing my friend. It's uncanny how closely my own relationship with my loved oned one reflects yours with Roseana. More importantly (to me)is the philosophy you employ when critting. I try to employ the same integrity and ask the same questions of myself in the hope of remaining in the upper class neighborhood. Light and fun Jay with philosophical undertones I greatly appreciate. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 29-Apr-2015

Dance therapy by Jackarrie

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Excellent acrostic Mary. The poem is very consistent with the message. It flows well with good rhythm and meter. Oh the joy of growing older. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 22-Apr-2015

Odd Man Out by N.K. Wagner

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This is a wonderful poem Nancy extolling the joy of being different. The poem flows well with good meter and rhythm. We should all lend a little encouragement now and then. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 22-Apr-2015

Portrait of a Friend by mfowler

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Oh the power of the female psyche. A manipulative gal for sure it seems to me. The poem flows well with good meter and rhythm. Your poem seems to have a bit of bitterness in it but that could be the way I interpret this piece. Nice work Mark. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 22-Apr-2015

haiku (Jacaranda blooms) by Joan E.

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Excellent Joan. Strong descriptors are supported by a strond satori. I love the reference to trumpets blaring. This is the best entry I have read. Best nwishes in the voting my friend. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 22-Apr-2015

An Alien Has Landed Here by adewpearl

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A fun read Brooke. The meter and rhythm are good. The poem flows well and paints a clear picture. As always, I love to read your work. Rod
Comment Written by rjpurdy on 22-Apr-2015


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