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Devil's Promises by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 29 of the book 2019

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Very cool. This made me laugh and made me think. Great picture to illustrate your piece. This shares such a powerful truth.Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 22-Jan-2019

Examining the Mind of Man, Part 4 by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Excellent thought provoking essay. I am so sorry to hear about your health issues. The quote by Edmund Burke is also one of my favorites. I think the question at the end definitely summed up your work and drew the reader in to make an introspective analysis of their own. Very powerful tactic that works because of the content and quality of your work. Thank you for sharing your work
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 22-Jan-2019

Change of Seasons by robyn corum

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I agree with your position on hunting. I liked the way this poem flows. I feel the rhythm is very well done. I also like the presentation.Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 22-Jan-2019

Perspectives by robyn corum

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Interesting poem Robyn. I'm currently in a situation where this applies to me. Worry is an energy stealer for sure. Great advice for anyone. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 22-Jan-2019

We Said Goodbye to Sassy Today by Teri7

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Sorry for your loss friend.
This is a good acrostic piece. I like the way it twlls a story. Its so very hard to lose a pet.Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 22-Jan-2019

STOP the Madness!! by robyn corum

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A fun poem exhorting us to abandon pumpkin spiced ... everything. I think you are fighting an uphill battle friend. Lol. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 14-Oct-2018

Chapter 25-Dr. York's Search by robyn corum
Chapter 25 of the book Kate

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I'm pretty sure I read some of this story somewhere along the way. This chapter is very well done. It makes me want to read the whole and to know what happens. Telling a story based in truth is more difficult than a completely fictional one because you have to get certain facts right. I think you did that very well. Also It is quite different from much of your poetry and shows a depth and multi dimesions to your talent. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 14-Oct-2018

Here's Why by damommy

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"I only know these are words are right." Is there an extra "are" in this sentence. Very interesting notes not too long in my opinion. Your poem is so you. You have such a clear style and point of view as a writer and it shines in every piece you write. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 08-Oct-2018

Greyson Has Fun at the Beach by Teri7

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Wow he is growing up so fast. He is such a cutie pie. Good photo of him at the beach. Good-five-seven five. Simple but tells the story. One note I think "enjoys" should actually be "enjoy". Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 08-Oct-2018

The Lightbulb Moment by Gloria ....

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Lol. Funny "light" poem. (pun intended) This gave me a chuckle. Those silly birds. I like this very much. I like the way you presented your woek. Great art. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written by sandy montgomery on 04-Oct-2018


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