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Specters, Zombies, and Rats by barkingdog

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I enjoyed reading this. It was fun and entertaining and I felt as though it encompassed the spirit of Halloween. The dialogue all made sense and the story flowed smoothly. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by isolddde on 03-Nov-2015

Where Do the Dreams Go by artemis53

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I enjoyed reading this. Your thoughts on dreams are interesting and I like how you took dreams in a different direction. I also like how you describe things and overall it flows very smoothly. Good job.
Comment Written by isolddde on 27-Sep-2015

I want to be with you, so much by XGoneX
Chapter 58 of the book Shattered

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I enjoyed reading this. I liked how you described everything because it was detailed and romantic. I don't know who these characters are, but I want to know more because of the intense relationship you created in between them. However in the line of, ". . .he reached her cavity in between her tights", do you mean thighs? If so, that's the only correction I found. Good job.
Comment Written by isolddde on 24-Sep-2015

Ghost Runner by ciliverde
Chapter 1 of the book Ghost Runner

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I enjoyed reading this. I liked the introduction at the beginning because it was an interesting point. I also liked how you described something specific about your sister, especially because I have never heard the term "Ghost Runner" nor did I even know that someone could run like a ghost in the first place. I'm sorry if your sister is a difficult topic to talk or write about, but I applaud you for doing so. Good start.
Comment Written by isolddde on 24-Sep-2015

Norfolk Twilight by MLEaton

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I enjoyed reading this. I liked how both Anna and Clive could see things and worked together and I liked how you described their relationship--it helped me connect with them more. The story flows smoothly and the dialogue is well written and fits the characters. However, the word "focused" and "unfocused" are spelled wrong and I think it would help the reader if the paragraphs were spaced instead of all together. Aside from that, good job.
Comment Written by isolddde on 24-Sep-2015

Sammy's Terryfying Halloween by Jacob Collins

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This was a cute story and I enjoyed reading it. The characters are all very different and I like the way the dialogue shows that. I also like how you wrote the story in not only a child's perspective, but also in the way a child would tell a story. It made me connect with the story more. Good job.
Comment Written by isolddde on 24-Sep-2015

What's Done Is Done by Jackreese
Chapter 28 of the book Secrets of Windwood

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I enjoyed reading this. I like the era that it's in, along with that characters and the events that are going on in this story. The dialogue is well written and it fits the characters overall. I'm interested in reading more. Good job.
Comment Written by isolddde on 24-Sep-2015

The Conjurer by Writingfundimension

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I enjoyed reading this. The story flows smoothly and I like how the curse words aided the character's overall personality. Even though I don't know his name or what he looks like exactly, I have a good idea of what he may look like. I also liked the topic and the dangerousness of it, along with the ambiguity. It made me want to read more. Awesome job.
Comment Written by isolddde on 24-Sep-2015

Before Dawning by justfos

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This is a really pretty poem. Because of the way you eloquently describe the scene around you, I am able to see what you see as well. I love that you call seeing dawn as a reward. I truly think people nowadays take sunrises and sunsets for granted, but I'm glad you don't. Nice job.
Comment Written by isolddde on 24-Sep-2015

Nde--2 by mlittleton

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I enjoyed reading this. I liked how you described the relationship of Andi and Tommy and their relationship overall is very cute. At some points, the dialogue was too quick but I thought it worked because of the dynamics of their relationship. Good job.

Isolde
Comment Written by isolddde on 09-Aug-2015


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