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The Problem with Labels by Janice Canerdy

Exceptional
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Lovely piece of work.


If we had no labels we could soar well beyond our 'classifications'. I, too, am a realist..... basically.


Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Quoiky on 19-Mar-2019
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Man, That Man is Crazy by Debbie Pope

Exceptional
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Nicely written.

Kudos on keeping everything flowing and grammatically correct while following the guidelines of the contest

Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written by Quoiky on 27-Feb-2019

Overherd at the Fare by Jannypan (Jan)

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Your poem covered all the requirements of the contest, but man was it hard to follow.

My feeble brain kept stopping and trying to fill in the correct word/spelling.

Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Quoiky on 27-Feb-2019

I want to write a poem.... by Randa Dayle

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Very cute poem. Very 'homonymous'.

The poem flows well and is very easy to read and follow.

And people say English is easy.


Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Quoiky on 27-Feb-2019

Taking Action by Debbie Pope

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Excellent writing.

I loved all of it, including the picture. The entire thing flows well, it makes sense and it tells a story.


Good job!


Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Quoiky on 19-Feb-2019
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The Monster Inside by Boogienights

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I enjoyed reading your work. It flowed well and had exceptional rhyming.

The only thing I would critique is this..... do you think in the very line you could eliminate the word...'up'?

It seems to throw off the rhythm a little.
Comment Written by Quoiky on 12-Feb-2019
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Green eyes by Jennie Phelps

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I enjoyed your writing. It flowed well and I could understand exactly what the writer was trying to relay.

I think we all have at least one 'green-eyed' monster in our lives and in my case it's definitely a female.


Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written by Quoiky on 12-Feb-2019
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How? by Candace Nola

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Your work flows well, and has very good meter.


It almost brought me to tears as I thought of my mother's passing.


The only criticism I would give is in the third stanza.....

"How do you face your day when tears choke each word that you say"... I don't think you need 'that'. I think it would flow better.
Comment Written by Quoiky on 12-Feb-2019
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Gotta Go by Denise J Tidwell

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A very sad story. One that parents never want to experience. I hope this is not a true story.

I would have given you a higher rating, but you had several grammatical errors and run on sentences.

All in all, I enjoyed your story and was able to follow the story line.
Comment Written by Quoiky on 01-Feb-2019
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The Marvelous Toy by Mark Valentine

Exceptional
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Bahahahahahahaha. This was the best laugh I've had all week.

Very creative and funny.


The poem flowed well and made me giggle at each line.


Too funny.
Comment Written by Quoiky on 31-Jan-2019
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