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Decision by Mastery

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A cute little story, Bob. I haven't been around too much lately. What with my husband passing away in December, and back surgery in January, my brain was on hold for a while. Hope to get back in the groove soon. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 02-May-2019

Beware by LovnPeace

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I agree with your point of view one-hundred- percent. Some of the humans are among the most vicious creatures on earth. It is sad what this world has become. I was born in the fifties and so much has changed since then. Thanks for the insight on a touchy subject. Well done.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 02-Apr-2019

The Bee and the Bear by robyn corum
Chapter 1 of the book You Can Count on Me!

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This is a cute little poem most any child would love. The artwork is perfect for the subject of your poem, It is really a great choice. I loved this poem and could find no errors. Best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 02-Apr-2019

Vivacious by Yvon

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Your significant other sounds like the most interesting person. some people are so full of life and energy they almost make one tired to be around them. LOL I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 14-Feb-2019

Dreams by easyeverett1

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I truly enjoyed reading your poem. I often read stories about the Bards that would sing stories and rhymes in the old days. I didn't spot any errors, it looks good to me.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 14-Feb-2019

David by ELAINE MARY

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Your husband sounds like the most interesting character. It's good to be around a person who will make you laugh and enjoy life. I wish you the best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 14-Feb-2019

Live With It by Gail Denham

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We are getting our share of snow here in Michigan this year too. All through December and half of January nothing, then WAM, it let us have it. Lol. I enjoyed your poem as it hits close to home. I wish you the best in the competition.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 14-Feb-2019

Tears by Jonbeyond
Chapter 4 of the book Letters to the self

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This is an excellent and inspirational poem. It is true what you write about tears, they have been around since the beginning of time. I truly enjoyed reading your poetry and will watch for more.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 14-Feb-2019

Homecoming For Dusty by country ranch writer
Chapter 23 of the book Bobby Joe Returns

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This is an interesting and entertaining story. I think you spelled (whinny) wrong. You spelled it (whining) It would sound the best is you added the word (to). The horse began to whinny. Otherwise, it is perfect.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 14-Feb-2019

My Puppy by johngie

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I love the picture you added to this poem. Is that a photo of your dog? I hope to get back in the mood for writing before too long, it's been a bit tough lately. Hey, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by prettybluebirds on 14-Feb-2019


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