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Allutia's Betrayal & Regret by michaelcahill
Chapter 7 of the book Vision and Sound: Their Stories

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I am enjoying this so much. I ought to go to bed, but have started from the beginning. This is a real page turner!

Typo: wrong form of 'their' in the chapter subtitle.

This Roman bit really shines, it is very well drawn and powerful.

Alison
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015

Oracles and Quests by michaelcahill
Chapter 48 of the book Vision and Sound: Their Stories

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Julia stepped up (to -missing) the oracle slowly. ..

I am really enjoying this novel of yours. I shall read it all in order when I have more leisure in which to do so.


Best wishes, Alison
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015

Delusions That Must Be Stopped by michaelcahill
Chapter 39 of the book Vision and Sound: Their Stories

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Hi

I have come along to read this, as recommended by Jay Squires on his essay on reviewing. He points this novel out as a first class example of giving brief chapter summaries so new readers are not lost.

This is very well done and hugely interesting. When I get time, I shall read more of it. I am very interested in past lives.

I thought I would review this chapter for you, as you are one short of a 15 on it.

Best wishes,

Alison
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015

The Narrow Path by michaelcahill

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Hi,

The way in which you have chosen to interpret is this is unique and evocative. It fits so beautifully with the photograph you have selected as well.

The effect of this is beautiful, and the message well stated.

Best wishes, Alison
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Macro/Micro Critting -- Continued by Jay Squires
Chapter 3 of the book How This Critter Crits

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Thank you once again, Jay - this is really usefully info.

I shall look up Mr Cahill's use of chapter summaries with much interest.

Best wishes, Alison
Purrs from Zahir
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015

WHY This Critter Crits by Jay Squires
Chapter 1 of the book How This Critter Crits

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Zahir, himself, is very proud to be called a FanStory Critter. He feels it place him a cut above common barn critters.

Once again, I am pleased you have taken this out of mothballs. It is enlightening, the Amazon business, as well as most amewsing, as Zahir would say.

Cheers, Alison
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015

How This Critter Crits by Jay Squires
Prologue of the book How This Critter Crits

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This is fabulous. I would bookmark the whole lot of it. But that one chapter will do to lead me to finding this again.

I can't give you more than one six. I need to preserve one for some other worthy being.

I love the 'scalded by my boiling passion'. Lol! I am so glad FanStory did encourage you to write more!

Alison
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015

Macro/Micro Critting by Jay Squires
Chapter 2 of the book How This Critter Crits

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This is so well written, and so true - about the chapter 17 of the novel -ironically close to where I am now in Zahir's novel.

You did make me laugh with the Clampett's hovel and Barbie's precious domicile.

I am glad you have decided to resurrect this series.

Best wishes, Alison
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015

Fresh Start by Patrick G Cox
Chapter 34 of the book Limehouse Boys

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Hi Patrick,

Belated congratulations on your final chapter of this fine novel. I am very much looking forward to your getting it published so I can enjoy reading it 'properly' as a real book.

Sorry for the patchy reviewing. I am in the process of putting the house on the market.

A wonderful read, every word. I really enjoyed following it.

Best wishes, Alison
Purrs to Harry and Blue from Zahir
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015

Shakespeare and Meteor Showers by Fridayauthor
Chapter 27 of the book Searching for Susan

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Thank you for your review of Zahir's chapter. It is always difficult to pick up the thread half way through a novel.

These letters are fascinating and it is wonderful that you managed to buy them all and are taking the trouble to transcribe them.

I also intended to read back your book, when I get a chance. At the moment I am, very reluctantly, attempting to prepare my house for the market, so not getting much time on here.

Best wishes, Alison
Cat Servant to Zahir
Comment Written by Cat of Letters on 03-May-2015


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