What a Night!!!
by Shirley McLain
_Being screamed at like that would be enough to wake anyone up, frightfully. At least they took the time to call you. Someone else may not have.
-Tornados are one of the most devastating events in nature. Have seen them completely exploded a house and leave nothing in their wake.
-"One never knows" is present tense, maybe to keep the whole piece part tense: )ne never knew
_Interesting choice, either face the tornado or the scorpions. Either way, you are caught up in a nightmare.
-High tension is maintained in the action throughout the piece.
-Hand-counted 100 words, so meets that requirement of the contest.
-My reviews are mere suggestions. Feel free to use anything that provides assistance and/or chuck the whole shebang.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 17-Feb-2020