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Good, strong, homonym. Meets the requirements of this contest spot on. A steel heart would be very hard to steal. Should make an interesting entry for this contest.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

A Note About Homer the Gnome by Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Interesting format for this well crafted pome. Although it has been hard, seems Homer is on quite an adventure. Good and strong rhyme words used throughout.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Once Upon A Log by Pam (respa)

Excellent

Interesting format for the poem. Nature has beauty humankind can not come close to matching as this well crafted poetry depicts. Would indeed be a sight to behold.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Decisions by Cindy Warren
Chapter 28 of the book Aaron's Dragons

Excellent

Seems Aaron will be king whether he wants to be or not, though he will continue to receive as much assistance as he requires. Sounds like he better get some sleep, he is going to need it.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Knit Wit by Susan Larson

Excellent

Contains 81 words so meets that requirement of this contest. Seems with what is currently the main headlines of the day many people are undertaking tasks that make them part of "a tightly knit community". Structurally, noted no nits.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Sixteen Candles by Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Makes one wonder why teens commit these acts? This well crafted, poignant, poem captures its theme spot on. Now, instead of celebrating her birthday they mourn her loss.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Forbidden Spring by Benshu-bookgai
Chapter 3 of the book Sensorial Introspection

Excellent

Line 1 paints a very strong and clear picture. Good comparison of how the desert wants the rain like you want your significant other and yet it is forbidden.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Hidden Quarters

Excellent

ear lope should be earlobe. Grandpa's, as you said, gotta love them. With the correction, this contest entry contains 99 words. Might want to reconsider that issue.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Piano Music by Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

True, Good music certainly livens up the party, and piano music is some of the finest. While this poem uses strong rhymes, why the change in rhyme scheme?

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

The Fisherman's Son-Fifty-Six by Ulla
Chapter 56 of the book The Fisherman's Son

Excellent

Have to remember this is written in British English, not American English, and there are no full stops in names like Mr Harris. In American English this would be annotated as Mr. Harris. The condition she left will force Lorenzo to pursue his ambition if he wants the money. business men you might reconsider to businessmen. This story continues to be very interesting.

Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020