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Sixteen Candles by Sharon Haiste

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Makes one wonder why teens commit these acts? This well crafted, poignant, poem captures its theme spot on. Now, instead of celebrating her birthday they mourn her loss.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Forbidden Spring by Benshu-bookgai
Chapter 3 of the book Sensorial Introspection

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Line 1 paints a very strong and clear picture. Good comparison of how the desert wants the rain like you want your significant other and yet it is forbidden.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Hidden Quarters by RShipp

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ear lope should be earlobe. Grandpa's, as you said, gotta love them. With the correction, this contest entry contains 99 words. Might want to reconsider that issue.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Piano Music by Sandra du Plessis

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True, Good music certainly livens up the party, and piano music is some of the finest. While this poem uses strong rhymes, why the change in rhyme scheme?
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

The Fisherman's Son-Fifty-Six by Ulla
Chapter 56 of the book The Fisherman's Son

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Have to remember this is written in British English, not American English, and there are no full stops in names like Mr Harris. In American English this would be annotated as Mr. Harris. The condition she left will force Lorenzo to pursue his ambition if he wants the money. business men you might reconsider to businessmen. This story continues to be very interesting.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Glimpse of Day by Y. M. Roger

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Strong use of alliteration and a good choice of the homonym, which by the way, meets the requirement of this contest. The picture painted by this well crafted poem shines forth. Should do very well in this contest.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 07-Apr-2020

Swimming by Shirley McLain

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Closeby should be close by. This is the only nit spotted.

Seems in this well crafted poem you delight in your pool. And, why shouldn't you?

Enjoyable poem.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 01-Apr-2020

A Window On My World by LisaMay
Chapter 1 of the book A Window On My World

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Coronavirus certainly has turned the whole world upside down. Instead of meeting people now, they want everyone to avoid one another. What a way to live. Hopefully, this foolishness won't last long and life will return to some semblance of normalcy.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 01-Apr-2020

Resurrection Morn by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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This well crafted poem sums His story up spot on in very few words. Selected, rejected, and resurrected sum up what life is all about for those who believe.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 01-Apr-2020

I Survived? by Sharon Haiste

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As if the crash isn't bad enough, the real horror is in who attends the victim. Cognizant of being injured in paragraph one, the victim realizes the danger posed by the being rescuing them. Well told.
Comment Written by Brett Matthew West on 01-Apr-2020


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