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Moving Home by Car by Pantygynt

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Great poetry an interesting submission of compound words and the flow is humorous. The storyline is fine the photo expresses the ingenious idea making it so real.
Comment Written by writeapoem on 20-Jan-2018

Fool's Folly by Dean Kuch

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Another by golly good submission titled Fool's folly. Yes, faults in philosophy I think I see what you mean, Dean. Why am I not surprised it was recognized and made an all-time best just like all the rest I have read from your collection.
Comment Written by writeapoem on 20-Jan-2018

Only God by Teri7

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This is a beautiful poem that honors God and heaven above. Grandma always claimed when rain turned to snow it cleaned the earth. I enjoyed your submission
Comment Written by writeapoem on 18-Jan-2018

Centre Point by Sebastian Hayes

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I am thrilled with your submission and the thoughts you express about the center-point of everything. For the heart is the center of all living past and present and I'm glad the center-point of my new life in Christ is forever and I know I can reach anywhere and anything. Thanks for reminding me of your thoughts in rhyme.
Comment Written by writeapoem on 18-Jan-2018

Voice of Nature by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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What a blessed thought you place in rhyme for the present time that we can see that there be no mystery of our history we can see with our own eyes the beauty of his creation throughout the ages still stages on which we can see his marvelous acts. The image you display compliments in a beautiful way what you express in your 5 7 5.
Comment Written by writeapoem on 18-Jan-2018

Starburst by evesayshi

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I can see why this 5 7 5 was recognized. The way you applied your rhyme to give us a lesson both on science and the creation that reflects Christ even when the Sun has set is an ingenious thought with so few words. All the best
Comment Written by writeapoem on 18-Jan-2018

Dusting by Katherine Elizabeth

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A delightful 5 7 5. Dusting my mother would dust off everything i think she saw as an art. Housework brought back memmories of a clean house. And a sister like you that hated it.
Comment Written by writeapoem on 17-Jan-2018

My Halloween Visitor by GLOBALEYES

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Quite an eerie October fright. The story in rhyme flows like ocean waves. Its descriptive of all the emotions associated with Halloween and strange visitors. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by writeapoem on 17-Jan-2018

The Clouded Gorge by Kory James

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This is an intriguing poem on faith. The flow rows like an ocean wave. It is descriptive of lifes journey walking by faith every mile just for one smile in life
Comment Written by writeapoem on 17-Jan-2018

My Gidget and Me: An English sonnet by Dean Kuch

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A very nice tribute to your canine freind. My dog Friskie was mine when i was thirteen. He was a lively pet i shall never forget. As always Dean your work reviews itself.
Comment Written by writeapoem on 17-Jan-2018


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