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Undefined by catch22

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This is so well written my friend. I love all the comparisons in this poem and all the truths about the poetic pen. Great to read you as always.
Comment Written by pennedup on 31-May-2015

To Brooke by TAB_that's me
Chapter 10001 of the book Get Well, Brooke!

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This is a lovely and lovingly written ode to personal piece of poetry. Very well written and straight from the heart of the poet.
Comment Written by pennedup on 31-May-2015

haiku (crescent moon) by TAB_that's me

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Now that is a great image (smile) loved it. . can picture it right now. Never thought of the moon and clouds like that, and that is where words and imagination work so well together. Nicely done.
Comment Written by pennedup on 01-May-2015

haiku (waves perform glam rocks) by ravim
Chapter 27 of the book Travesty2015

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Like this little haiku, as well as your image you placed with it. I always enjoy reading this form of poetry and know how hard it is to create a thought and image in such a restrictive form. So kudos for that, and I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written by pennedup on 01-May-2015

haiku (ol' devil moon) by vapros

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So, so true!! He is a such a voyeur *smile" , the stories he could tell. Love this haiku, it is one of my favorite poetry forms and you have done it justice.
Comment Written by pennedup on 01-May-2015

The Cause by catch22
Chapter 12 of the book Righteous Babe

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excellent write, strong and powerful lines and images in this "battle cry" that is what this reminds me of. It is so very easy to disguise evil isn't it. Love the last line. "So stand and wave your battered sign."
Comment Written by pennedup on 01-May-2015

Spots to Spare by adewpearl

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I think I would keep them too.. LOL... Love the rhyme scheme and the flow that is so popular in children's poems, books etc. So appealing to the ear. Great job here.

Comment Written by pennedup on 01-May-2015

Attacked by the Past by TAB_that's me

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Very well written, great images, especially the Jack-in-box one, sticks out for me. .. and darn good advice. We ignore or sideline as you say and don't deal with those memories and they end up defining who we are, dragging us down with them. Great job.
Comment Written by pennedup on 01-May-2015

Death to Detestation by TAB_that's me

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very well stated my friend. Your use of "war" repeatedly, brings strength to this peace of writing. Well thought out. Like the way you started this and then brought the dark side strong and direct. Comparing "porch swings and lemon aid" to "war" and all it for tales.
Comment Written by pennedup on 16-Apr-2015

Mellower by RYME4U

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Want to tell me your secret!! (smile) Nicely written poem, doesn't feel forced , which can happen in these form poems. Also like that you used end line rhyme.
Comment Written by pennedup on 15-Apr-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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