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Insight by sammielwf

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Hello Sammiel,
You've written an excellent three line poem for the contest.
The poet often sees what the eyes cannot,
for therein lies insight.
Word pictures is how language began.
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written by rspoet on 29-Sep-2020

Check Please by Opal Rose

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Hello Opal,
You've certainly created a heat wave with your lustful longing
and sensual splendor imagery.
You might employ a caesura pause (~) after Thee to create some separation and avoid confusion with 'The."
Otherwise, well done.
Good luck in the four line contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written by rspoet on 29-Sep-2020

Questions by Pam (respa)

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Hello Pam,
You've written a beautiful, encouraging poem about the many
questions we confront in our world and personal lives,
and offered some answers and suggestions like never giving up,
and working together, digging deeper, and letting our words be heard.
The poem reads smoothly with fine meter and has excellent aabb rhymes.
The entire presentation is splendidly done with the striking photograph, matching color and font, and the detailed notes.
Beautiful post.
Robert
Comment Written by rspoet on 29-Sep-2020

A Red Montana Sun by Lisa Wharton

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This is an excellent 5-6-5 poem for the object contest.
I assume the sun or sunset is considered an object.
Excellent description and photograph to match.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written by rspoet on 28-Sep-2020

Black Hole by juliaSjames

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Hello Julia,
This is an excellent 5-7-5 three line poem for the contest
Hopefully, we will not make one more misstep,
I don't think the vortex is very forgiving.
The black hole is a powerful force in the universe,
but it seems to be confined to small areas,
and light avoids it.
Interesting art work.
Best wishes to you and much light.
Robert
Comment Written by rspoet on 28-Sep-2020

Father Time

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Yes, time is the ever moving flow,
though its speed may seem to vary,
it is a constant of existence.
Best to make good use of the time we have.
Excellent picture to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written by rspoet on 28-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Ode to our protectors

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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 ode on the theme
of honoring those heroes who sacrifice to give us the freedom
we enjoy today. This should resonate well with fanstorians,
as Veterans Day in the US isn't far off.
Perfect picture to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

Comment Written by rspoet on 28-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Weathering The Storms by Dorothy Farrell

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Hello Dorothy,
True love is the key to many things, including weathering the storms.
Two is far more than one plus one.
Even nature agrees with the heart of stone between the two peaks.
Nicely done.
Best wishes to both of you.
Robert

Comment Written by rspoet on 28-Sep-2020

Ode to All

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Hello Writer,
An interest ode to everyone, with some internal rhyme
and the correct 5-7-5 syllables.
A lot of you, for and two too.
Good luck with the contest,
maybe everyone will vote as well as applaud.
Robert
Comment Written by rspoet on 28-Sep-2020
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Halls

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Hello Writer,
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest.
I assume an ode to student halls, or memories
back when life was more 'normal.'
Excellent art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

Comment Written by rspoet on 28-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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