An excellent poem as you take the reader on a journey
through the broken imagery. But I wonder, has not the imagery
been broken for centuries, even millennia.
There is little that is new or unique in the story of man,
layered in the strata of stone and sand
repeated again and again.
There is still light and dark, and the ending has yet to be written.
Excellent imagery and use of language.
Comment Written by rspoet on 28-Jan-2020