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Oh to capture. by royowen

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Such a beautiful, peaceful poem. It begins talking of fantasies and dreams, love and peace. Then goes on to tell us that God is all that and more. All our dreams and desires can be fulfilled once we let Jesus lead our lives. It rhymes and flows exceptionally. Wonderfully written, and certainly worth of my last 6.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written by inside echo on 01-Aug-2015

( Acrostic) Saved By Grace by pharp

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Well done Pharp. Very well written Acrostic poem. You don't have any mistakes. Very well done. I am so glad you have written this. Exceptional writing. You deserve a six. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written by inside echo on 01-Aug-2015

So Will I by I am Cat

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A pretty poem. The comparisons between the setting sun, retiring for the night, and your relationship with someone who matters is well done. I like both the poem and the pic used. Beautiful clouds showing off before their lights are closed off for the day. Are you asking your love to make the promise, or the setting sun? Well written, and has a peaceful feeling, although your question is asked over again, so it isn't relaxed, you are needing an answer. I hope you get the one you hope for.
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Comment Written by inside echo on 30-Jul-2015

Photographic Fears by I am Cat

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No that rat didn't just walk on by. Neither did the poverty and all the other things a young child should never face. I am sorry the rat liked you, I am sorry he stole so much of you. Even though he is gone the memories and the damage and the pain he caused will never disappear. Yes they get easier with time, but the never disappear. For that I am sorry.
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Comment Written by inside echo on 30-Jul-2015

Making Memories by EricBrady

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I apologize, but I had to google this style of poetry. You seemed to follow it perfectly and as required.
I love this poem. the transition between the young and old, the fire strong to dying out, youth fading. What is left after the children sleep, and the fire dies, are the memories of youth you will always have pictured and felt both in your heart and mind, and as they grow, they have the memory of love you gave them, a memory of happiness. There is not greater gift to give a child.
Well done. Excellently written.
Thank you for sharing.
tgc
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Comment Written by inside echo on 30-Jul-2015

Freedom's like... by royowen

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Just as you said, freedom came at a huge cost, but as it came, those who fought, fought with their all. So they got their freedom, when they had paid the ultimate price, their freedom came when they had nothing left to lose... that is the way I saw it. People had made such a mess of their lives and the lives of other. Jesus died for us, so that we may be free from sin. People being human usually wait till they are down and out and have no where else to turn, after drugs, alcohol, ect, all the other escapes, when they have no where else to turn. Nothing left to lose. Some on deaths doorstep. Jesus doe not care when we come to him, he will take us at our best, but also at our worst, when we have having left to lose. That is the way I hear Janis's words.
Well written and though provoking as always Roy.
Thank you for sharing your poem and your thoughts.
tgc
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Comment Written by inside echo on 30-Jul-2015

Too Big by Kingsland
Chapter 166 of the book Wanting more

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I think there are many people fighting for various "causes", but none united on the bigger picture. With the governments doing, they are sending out so many messages, so many issues that it appears people are taking on an issue, this being the governments hope, so that they avoid the larger, all consuming problem, being government itself.
Your poem is insightful and has good cause. It is well written and thoughtful, as well as thought provoking.
Well done.
Thank you for sharing.
tgc
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Comment Written by inside echo on 30-Jul-2015

K.L.M.N cards by sandramitchell
Chapter 3 of the book AmaZing AlphaRhymes

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Another great set of poetry cards you are creating for your grandchild. You are half way through. If you need pictures of these animals for your cards, I found a great site that you can print them from.
Well done, informative and educationally written. Your poems are perfect, and says in young language just the right info required for them. Keep going, you're nearly halfway now. Well done.
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Comment Written by inside echo on 30-Jul-2015

Love's Sweetest Song by nancyjam

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A beautiful loving poem you have written here. A great contest entry. I am glad you have found this love with your wife. It is always cheerful to read about a strong love.
Your poem is very well written, creatively written and easy to read and understand. Your chosen style of poetry is a perfect one for you words. Well done.
Good luck in your contest.
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Comment Written by inside echo on 30-Jul-2015

Maligayang Kaarawan by I am Cat

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What a sweet poem written for your friends wife. I am sure when he reads it to her she will wear a huge smiling. Was very nice of you to write a poem for her. A great birthday dedication.
Your poem is well written. It is a happy and celebratory poem. Well done.
thank you for sharing.
Happy Birthday Delia.
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Comment Written by inside echo on 30-Jul-2015


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