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The Dance by Annette R.

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an interesting and well written opening chapter. You write the characters' point of views pretty well. A well written story. Good job. Please keep up the good work
Comment Written by beizanten on 19-Jun-2021
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Not such a brilliant idea by Wendy G

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An interesting beginning and premise. good idea not using name, it make easier to relate to the characters. A whale cruising date and buffet that is one date i want to go to
Comment Written by beizanten on 14-Jun-2021
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First Date by Joanne Gill

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good picture it suit the poetry. A rather simple poetry but pretty well written. A beautiful ending, may you guys live long and happy. You have done a pretty good job.
Comment Written by beizanten on 12-Jun-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

First Date by Joanne Gill

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good picture it suit the poetry. A rather simple poetry but pretty well written. A beautiful ending, may you guys live long and happy. You have done a pretty good job.
Comment Written by beizanten on 12-Jun-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Eiffel tower-size asteroid Earth by LittleIrishman

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Wow, interesting fact about meteors oriented films. love the movie Armageddon. Thank you for sharing this! great facts about meteor, i had no idea so many meteors passing by earth
Comment Written by beizanten on 05-Jun-2021

Spectacular Sunrise by LisaMay

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A good choice of title and very beautiful picture. A very simple yet beautifully written poetry. You have done a great job. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written by beizanten on 05-Jun-2021

Errors! by Alcreator Litt Dear
Chapter 9 of the book Oh Life!

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A pretty good piece of poetry. I am curious about this book of poetry. True human wasn't perfect and would never be perfect unlike god. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written by beizanten on 05-Jun-2021

Spun Ivory by Carlos' girl

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Great title and the picture really suit the poetry. Is rapunzel okay in this story, great story ether way. Very imaginative despite it shortness. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by beizanten on 05-Jun-2021

Five Haiku About Evergreens by jake cosmos aller

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A good opening stanza, true no one could escape death. A very good second and third paragraph. Narnia? It is like the world inside the closet? A good fourth and ending paragraph.
Comment Written by beizanten on 05-Jun-2021

Reed Bad ass cop script p11 by MCLII1987

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The opening paragraph is very good but you make a typo mistake. It should 'be there is a knock on the door'. You explain the character emotion through their action well.
Comment Written by beizanten on 05-Jun-2021


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