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Poetry and Poison: Chapter 8 by Sis Cat
Chapter 8 of the book Poetry and Poison

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An amazing chapter of a story of two children looking into their deceased mother's past only to discover the pain she dealt with regarding their birth and periods of mental illness in her writings as well as a search for a famous sculpture produced by their renowned father and given as a present to their mother. Well written with an insightful plot and lots of intrigue as they delve into their parents past!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 28-Dec-2015

Poetry and Poison: Chapter 9 by Sis Cat
Chapter 9 of the book Poetry and Poison

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A very interesting chapter of a sculptor who portrays the growing role of woman in society and positions of power as they overcome man's superiority and come into the beginning of a new era of equality. Well written with interesting artistic implications as well as an inspiration to women and artists around the world!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 28-Dec-2015

Learning to Fly by humpwhistle

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A wonderful and enchanting story involving a grandfather and his grandson discussing the future of an outstanding invention that has not been revealed because of the fear of the grandfather that the advanced technology may be used for destructive purposes by the government. Instead he hopes to use the media and Christmas Eve to draw the attention of so called right minded people to his futuristic vehicle so that it will be used for good purposes and the first person he turns to is his grandson to enlist his help by teaching him to fly so that his grandfather's legacy to the world will be in safe hands. Well written with lots of imagination and an outstanding and entertaining plot!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 28-Dec-2015

Chapter 28 -- Breaking Point by jpduck

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A great chapter in a story of a couple in love who are studying in university together to fulfill their ambitions as well as planning their future together as husband and wife. The man, Nick, has had an experience with time travel and wants to further his career so he can study it in his career. Unfortunately that doesn't go over well with his fiance as she had other plans for them and she decides to leave him, which devastates both of them. Their friends and family try to work out a plan to get them back together giving Alex hopeas he regrets his selfishness at putting his goals before their life together. Well written, with a romantic plot with a mysterious twist on time travel and an endingfull of hopen and anticipation!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 28-Dec-2015

My Reasons to Write Poetry by Gert sherwood
Prologue of the book Poetry is a Necessity

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Great interweaving poetic threads of the joy of creating verses along with examples of different styles creating a beautiful piece of art. Well written, artistic as well as creative and definitely something that would be worth expanding on or even just pulling it into a tight close at the end to polis things off!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 27-Dec-2015

Shoved Into A Box by Day Z Chayn
Chapter 2 of the book Knotted Litanies

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An tortured poem of a lost someone who has lost their partner in life and is hurting with the fact that the partner is looking and sleeping with others while they wait patiently on the sidelines for them to realize that true love is right there with their long time partner. Well written, full of emotion and a topic that many will relate to!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 26-Dec-2015

Yes I Am a Rich Man by Pyrrho

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A very entertaining poem of a writer who mixes together other people's ideas in order to create a brilliant work of imagery and imagination. Well written with a lot of meaning and humour!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 26-Dec-2015

Celluloid Beauty by nassus1957

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An interesting and realistic poem of the trials of being a fashion model for the sake of vanity turning them into a mannequin of fate. Well written and true to form!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 26-Dec-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Head and Heart by Katiesherrill

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A wonderful lyric about God and his love and someone faces troubles with the hope that all of God's goodness applies to them and that they are part of that eternal love. Well written containing wonderful rythm and a song that many of us hope and pray for!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 26-Dec-2015

We'll Remember Auld Lang Syne by I am Cat

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An awe inspiring poem of
the many joys and sounds of Christmas built around a famous Scottish tune with an ending full of love and appreciation to all the wonderful members of this unique and caring site. Well written, full of life and love with a beautiful message of appreciation to our FanStory members.

Thank you for sharing the wonderful thoughts and all the help and love you give to this site. Wish I had a six left!
Comment Written by Lesley Collier on 26-Dec-2015


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