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Slinky Girl by humpwhistle

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Nicely done, six words or less is pretty hard to do. Hard to even get any type of point across. This flows pretty easily. Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written by penneylane on 05-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

haiku (the setting sun) by Donya Quijote

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Definitely a good haiku. The picture goes well with it. I like the way it switches from the theme of nature, to the human nature of (an ended?) friendship. ties together nicely.
Comment Written by penneylane on 03-May-2015

Bad Wine by Brett Matthew West
Chapter 32 of the book Reflections Of Color

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This is excellent poetry. Life is definitely too short to drink bad wine, yet, until we realize it, and often times even after, we will drink the bad wine and live the bad aftermath of it. Good job!!
Comment Written by penneylane on 03-May-2015

Modern Family by judiverse

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Very good analogy. Sometimes being a mother does feel equivalent to being a lioness. You have to have that fierceness at times, otherwise, things can get rough. Good writing!
Comment Written by penneylane on 03-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Thank you, California, USA by Dom G Robles

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This is so beautifully written. California is one of the most beautiful places in the world, especially San Fran Bay, and 1968?? what an amazing time to be alive and in the mix of everything. For that, I am envious. I hope when your time does come, you are able to be next to your ROSE, forever. Sounds like a life well spent:)
Comment Written by penneylane on 03-May-2015

haibun (nicked artery) by Spiritual Echo

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Very nicely written. It is a hard battle, to care about someone, yet at the same time so desperately want to not care at all. Well written.
Comment Written by penneylane on 03-May-2015

A Wisp of a Notion by Kingsland
Chapter 228 of the book Word Trumpeting

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I really liked this. You say its just words for words sake, but I disagree. There is meaning behind everything we write, even if we don't realize what it is. especially like the verse , a place that has nowhere to be, a sight that you can not see. Good writing!
Comment Written by penneylane on 03-May-2015

No Such Thing As Angels by Brett Matthew West
Chapter 31 of the book Reflections Of Color

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This is absolutely beautiful. Such a sad, yet happy story. This woman sounds like she's a real woman, yet it's hard on someone, no matter how strong they are, to watch the one they love do this to themselves. Great writing!!
Comment Written by penneylane on 28-Apr-2015

A sweet proposition by ravim
Chapter 26 of the book Travesty2015

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Excellent senryu. makes you think it's something dirty, but nope, just chocolate (which, to be honest, is often just as good ). perfect picture.
Comment Written by penneylane on 28-Apr-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Bruce by bob cullen

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I don/t think this is over the top at all. I think it really gives a sense of who bruce was, and that he was well liked. Sorry for your loss, definitely something you should be able to read to a crowd of people who knew him.
Comment Written by penneylane on 26-Apr-2015


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