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Hopes Dashed -- 1879-1881 by Pantygynt
Chapter 24 of the book The Maid of the Mill

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I found this chapter quite interesting. I admit I'm not totally invested in the characters yet but it kept my interest.

I really just enjoyed the read and didn't stumble over anything I'd change.

Well done, Gynt
Comment Written by justafan on 15-Jun-2020

Till Shadows Have Eaten the Moon by WalkerMan

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Laugh with me, cry with me,
Share your deep thoughts --
There's life to be lived...
Till shadows have eaten the moon.


Using 20 ordinary words, you have given true love flight.

Simply breathtaking, my dearest poet.

Thank you for sharing your soul :)

Always
Justafan of yours
~M~
Comment Written by justafan on 15-Jun-2020

Mandorla by WalkerMan

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Loving til ages unwind

~sigh~
Soft, caressing and timeless! You have so much tenderness in your art!

You don't even feel the bonds that are woven around your heart as you read these beautiful lines.

~Sigh~

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 14-Jun-2020

Saying Goodbye by WalkerMan

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Reading this brought tears to my eyes.
Love is evident in every word.

I never really knew my father. He died in a hunting accident before my 5th birthday. I often wonder how different my life may have been.

Beautifully done.

Always
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 14-Jun-2020

Away by WalkerMan

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My dear poet, your notes alone should disqualify me from writing this review.
But, the tenderness in each word ... I felt.

My favorite(if I had to choose one) would be;
Yet patience must my soul command for now,
Sometimes, patience is the glue that keeps a dream alive.

Beautiful ...just beautiful!

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 14-Jun-2020

Beyond Dreams by WalkerMan

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Hello, my new friend. I went for a walk through the beautiful landscape of poetry you have created, til I found this stunning creation. I stopped and as I read, found myself hanging on every word.
Some of us strive a lifetime for the perfection you gave here!
Thank you so much for sharing:)

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 13-Jun-2020

The Fisherman's Son-Sixty-Six by Ulla
Chapter 66 of the book The Fisherman's Son

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I can see I have a great deal of catching up to do, my friend.
This is told with a softness born of familiarity to be sure!
I felt as if I was there as the doors opened and the bride entered.

Really well done, my friend!

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 13-Jun-2020

Forevermore by Diana L Crawford

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Hauntingly beautiful my new friend!
It oozed yearning!

You gave us the beauty of "romantic language"

Well done :)

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 12-Feb-2020

One shining moment by Mark Valentine

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I was along for the ride and it was beautiful!
You did a marvelous job with this, Mark.

Congrats on your placement in the contest.

Always justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 11-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Mourning by simonbagh

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Hauntingly beautiful my new friend. Our lives a but a blink in time so we must live each as it were the last.
If I had one crit... not of the art itself but spacing.

Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 27-Jan-2020


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