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Mourning by simonbagh

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Hauntingly beautiful my new friend. Our lives a but a blink in time so we must live each as it were the last.
If I had one crit... not of the art itself but spacing.

Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 27-Jan-2020

Aldo Esposito by Thomas Bowling
Chapter 2 of the book The Deadly Wind

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Some people feel they are proficient story tellers, but lack the ability to keep the reader in the story line. You definitely are not one of those. This work is one that left me wanting more!
Well done Thomas.

Justafan a fan of yours,
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 22-Sep-2019

I Took The Fall by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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This style of poetry is hard for me to latch onto but I persevered and reread with your music choice playing in the background and fell in love with this!

Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 22-Sep-2019

The Fisherman's Son-Twenty-Eight by Ulla
Chapter 28 of the book The Fisherman's Son

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I've been neglectful of all my friends in FanStory but it's wonderful to see talent is talent especially with you. I've not read the previous post of this work but it grabbed my attention and pulled me right in.

Wonderful work my lovely friend.

Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 22-Sep-2019

My take on poetry ... by Richard J

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Richard this brilliant.

. Whether all that pours forth from my pen to page comes from some place fanciful or factual, it all originates from something I've lived, learned, or deeply and characteristically (almost instinctively) understood within me ... a place as natural as breathing, or the quick, unaware blink of an eye, while the heart beats independently and the soul soars free on its own accord."

My favorite line is; all that pours forth comes from some place fanciful or factual.

I feel you aptly captured a poets soul here, but then in the next with a touch of the pen, you set it free again.

Your love of the written is soft, humble and filled with respect.

Always Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 28-Oct-2018

Drac by BeasPeas
Chapter 1 of the book Bewitching Halloween

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Marilyn, I'm inclined to agree with you, this is so cute.

Coincidence, I'm watching TWILIGHT!

I love it. Thank you for sharing! (Again)

Always Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 27-Oct-2018

Tanka 10/25 (dead arise awake) by Pantygynt

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Very nice, sir. I sometimes long to be able to write poetry in the different genres, but I've found my niche in free verse.

I enjoyed this Tanka.
Thanks for sharing.

Always Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 25-Oct-2018

I Used to Be a Hippy by Thomas Bowling

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Isn't it grand to embrace all the ways life has prepared us for adulting. :)

I throughly enjoyed this glimpse into your younger self.

Thank you, Thomas for allowing us in.

Always Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written by justafan on 25-Oct-2018

Oh, Rats! by Dean Kuch

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SPLAT!!
That's what would happen to a rat around me!

Good luck with the contest my friend.

Thank you for sharing as well!

Always
Justafan
Comment Written by justafan on 25-Oct-2018

The Heart of a Friend by MissMerri

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Just lovely!

Your choice of art and color palette give off a softness that settles even the most anxious soul.

You certainly have my vote

Thank you for sharing!

Always
Justafan
Comment Written by justafan on 25-Oct-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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